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Published: 2019-02-20 23:18:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 937; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Meme: Before and After


Original:



New:

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Well......this happened....later.....I didn't notice that they were two different pages  


Ah well  


There are really big differences here. Let's talk about them X3

  • Obviously style, I dont think I really have to talk about it. But look at the improvement   I had thinker lines then. Isaac's eyes were always changing caz everytime I would look at a Riolu ref, the eyes would be orange to red X'D Eventually, I stuck with red, caz I think that's the main color now and days.
  • Sparkle's location. I think Page 6 Sparkle was actually in her room and not in the Med Tree with Isaac. Back then, I wanted to show Sparkle's hearing. But I kinda show that earlier, in the remakes, when she saves Isaac.
  • Backgrounds. There's more trees in the backgrounds in the newer one   I still hate backgrounds, but I find just moving the layers to another is easier than redoing the same thing. However, angles I have to do caz obviously I can't keep the backgrounds on one angle caz then it's look weird. I guess Viridian Forest lost their trees in the original X'D
  • Dialogue. In the original, Sparkle just catches up to him, then gets in front of him, then drags him back when he challenges her to make him.
    In the newest, Sparkle actually just sneaks around him and then stops him. And this time, she doesn't actually talk much. Instead just doesnt take crap and just drags him back.
    She's not amused I love it
  • Speak Bubbles. Let's address the Donphan in the room, the text and speak bubbles. Back then I didn't know much of PS, obviously, so I was limited (plus wat is it, Photoshop 5 or 6 maybe 8, I think we're at 19 or 20 now{I'm actually using 19 right now caz 20 doesnt have the lines to transform the layers no more, Idk if they fixed it yet or not, but I can't transform anything to make bigger or smaller}) Anyway, then I only found the round speak bubbles, and the thought speak bubble was actually an image off of Google. Because I didnt find a thinking speak bubble in the shapes. And then, for some odd reason, I had the text almost the same color as the speak bubbles but a bit of a darker shade but not dark enough. I think I was trying something and it failed.
    Now its way much better to read, because I found more shapes hidden in Photoshop X3
  • Sizes. Some odd reason.....Sparkle is smaller in the original, Idk y she was always around Isaac's height.
  • Some other small details. In the original, I think Isaac was like 99% healed, either that 100% and Iron just wanted to keep an eye on him for a few days to make sure he was clear.
    In the newest, you can see Isaac hold his stomach caz of the pain of the poison's antidote Iron gave him.
    Also Isaac's color is kinda bleh in the original, idk what happened there.
    Also, Isaac's nose is scrunching when he grumbles at the end, where the original there is no detail.
  • Shadings. There was like....none back then, only underneth them....except a few panels I just now notice Sparkle doesnt have a shadow in a panel
    Newst one, obviously there's full shadings.
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    Yeah....I think that's all X'D


    I love this page, caz I think its underrated against then Attract Accident. I'm surprised no one even remembers this page for the contests. This was a good scene.

    But yeah later guys  

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    Comments: 2

    InterstellarDragonet [2019-03-31 05:46:30 +0000 UTC]

    Improvements very evident, i like that, it shows how much you improved

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    PrincessAshley91 [2019-02-21 00:47:24 +0000 UTC]

    Very nice, you can see a lot of improvements. The old page, id describe as basic. Decent for someone just starting out. The new one, you can see a lot of improvement. You've worked hard to get to this point and i hope you continue to improve from here

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