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Published: 2012-06-05 20:12:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 6448; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 25
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I already have the story for the whole comic. Just need the support readers give me to beat my laziness xDAnd im very sorry if the text is confusing or not good expressed. I used internet to find the words i was looking for. English is still difficult for me when i try writting for a story or dialog.
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Mr- Jones P- 03
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StringDoll (c)
Clyde (c)
Paddywhack (c) Darkwing Duck - Disney
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SD in panel 1: I have never seen her so restrained! It makes me wonder what Clyde has on her to keep her under control like that.
PW is still both making me giggle and also just a little too handsome. I love that Clyde can terrify him just by appreciating him. XD The faces in the final panel are excellent, both of them - and so are Clyde's hands! In every panel, in fact!
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Yeps! There are SD sides people does still not know, thats why i wanted to do a comic for a year already! When working, she is able to control herself.. at least infront her customers.
And right, Clyde scares even Paddywhack, and SD feels respect for clyde. (She thinks Shemales are the most charismatic people in world. And fabulous customers also xDDDD For work and also clothes)
Hahah xDD Funny reaction. Its nice. I try showing people that a ghoul can also look sexy and handsome. But maybe i went too far. People start drooling xD.
Thankyou! I worked a lot on last panel, wanted to express their feelings as well as possible. One horrified and the other... well... as clyde himself XD
Thankyou! Clyde hands are tiny, expressive and easy! Paddywhacks are the total contrary!
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The eyes...they piece my soul!
Clyde's scarier than PW.
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Mahaha xD
Thats what i say!
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Augh Gawd, I love Paddywhack's expression in the last panel! It's great
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PW's FACE in the last panel! 
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i Thought I'd never see something like that...
Paddywhack scared!
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Everything is possible xD Specially with Clyde around xD
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Nice work so far. I love Clyde's eyes in the second panel.
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OH my Godness, joder!
No tengo palabras!
This is beyond fantastic; I LOVE how you draw fat transvestites XD Seems to come very naturally for you.
Again, the colours are amazing; I don't think I've ever laid eyes on SO much pink and purple, in my LIFE, and dear lord, I love PAddy just for wearing brown colours. And I have to compliment you on Clydes eyes - if there's anything pretty about Clyde, surely, it's his eyes - SO much drama in the second panel.
I seriously cannot WAIT to see what more will happen 
I also ADORE how the others are speaking with black font, but Clyde has the pink/white one... GENIAL!
SD in the first panel is the cutest thing ever; I REALLY dig her lovely figure and her tiny hands and feet, makes her so elegant and adorable, and that red is REALLY just... her; You'd think it would clash with her hair, but it doesn't... it doesn't... It's just perfect.
The last panel is my favourite though; Everything from Clydes shameless flirting (he's SUCH a bossy drunk) and that... evil teasing he's doing to the poor ghoul. His comment is fan-fabulous and darn it, Paddy is looking ADORABLE, especially with that panicking expression of his!
En serio mija, este dibujo es genial! Estoy totalmente fascinada!
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Mahahaha xD I laughed a lot with your first line, really. My mind was like : Ive been caught! ups! xD. My new character is actually fat, ya know... and has those manners i love to draw (i also love the transvestites characters in Shin Chan movies. They are the best and most charismatic and crazy characters in all the serie.)
I have to love transvestites, they are awesomeness.
Thanks! Me neither! So much pink and purple is not my style xD But i thought it would fit Clydes Club. And thanks! I sometimes am not sure if its a good idea to make people love that much paddy. Me not want to share him xDDD I always like more autum colors, browns, oranges and reds. A bit tim burton style. Fits a dead duck xD
Yeah! I love clyde eyes (also his body, cause its fun). I really wanted to work on his eyes more than on the others eyes.
Wow! Thanks a lot, makes meh blush. I got people interested in a comic! But im so slow drawing it i feel sorry for you all xD.
Oh yeah, i thought the fonts needed to have each characters personality on it xD And its easier to know who is talking.
Thankyou! I wasnt sure how tall Clyde is. I wanted to show SD to be little, very little even near Clyde. Must be the green eyes. Fits good with reds.
Thanks! I really wanted that scene to look hillarious, you know i cant do things without a joke in them.
Somehow that comment came to me just by thinking of Clyde looking at the bowtie. Nice the comment has sense even in english xd. Hahaha xD Love to draw panicking ghouls xD
Muchas gracias ^^ Me alaga mucho tu comentario. A ver si logro que el resto del comic tenga sentido.
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XD You've done it again! Wonderful work as always, and your english is improving by the way!
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Hehe Thanks! And thankyou ^^ Thats nice to hear.
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Yus! the third installment, it's got me wondering what SD will up to in part 4. And, naturally, Clyde goes straight for Paddywhack and starts hitting on him. God, it feels like Seattle all over again Can't wait for the next part. Awesome rendering btw!
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Hahaha xD Thankyou!
Clyde is Dangerous and scary. More than paddywhack xD
But the story is long, and dont know how many pages its gonna need for the action to start.
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Well, more power to you! Heck, I'm still sketching storyboards for the first of several graphic novels. Your story is starting to get suspenseful, keep building up the suspense and I'll stay glued to DA to see what happens next
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Wow, thanks a lot again ^^ Really.
Ill try my best on this.
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Hee, I am really loving every page of this comic so far!
Also, I can say that your english in the comic comes off *excellent*. It sounds perfectly natural, not broken or awkward - so, good job with your researching. You don't need to worry at all.
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Thankyou! ^^ Nice to know.
Oh, and thanks a lot ^^ thats nice. At least people understand it. Thats enough for me ^^
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This is funny stuff my friend. I can't wait for the next page.
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Thankyou! But youll have to wait,sorry 
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ah
you best be getting your work done
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Yeps!
Better. At least, if i wanna have summer vacations and time for my comics xD
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YOu rock hunny!
You seen the pic i showed you?
The one about my OC?
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Thanks again!
OH yes i did. Sorry i forgot to comment.
Nice to see Mr Banana brain haunted ones more xD mehehe
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*giggle* I wish our OC's could of met with the fact SD don;t trust CAroline. I think they'd be really good friends....I hope. So whose they guy staring at PW?
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Well, i dont know ^^U
And its Clyde, already appears on second page, and its FrothingLizards character. its a Shemale, we could say.
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