HOME | DD

pinali — Design Sheet: Eli

Published: 2010-09-08 19:14:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1246; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 21
Redirect to original
Description Eli casual dress design and some expressions.

From my comic "Alter" [link]
Related content
Comments: 25

RevenBG [2010-12-18 04:15:42 +0000 UTC]

I love ypur concept but 4 me its kinda hard to do because i keep drawing OFF page.....

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pinali In reply to RevenBG [2010-12-18 13:16:32 +0000 UTC]

Well it's easy when you're doing it digitally. Can resize/move it. Haha.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

RevenBG In reply to pinali [2010-12-18 19:51:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah your right im right now try to do my manga but in Japanese style meaning Reading from right to left but not easy 4 the frames to fit the pics

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pinali In reply to RevenBG [2010-12-23 15:55:47 +0000 UTC]

I don't really understand why anyone would draw right to left if the language of the comic is left to right... the flow is not so good

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

RevenBG In reply to pinali [2010-12-23 21:36:15 +0000 UTC]

Well ive read alot of japanese manga and they all right to left and i ve gotten used to it so i idecided to do that but it just the pic frames r hard depending on whats going on in the pic and story.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

greenglassesgirl [2010-09-09 18:35:35 +0000 UTC]

I love how you draw your characters! I know this already been said, but I really like his hair...honestly, I like everything about him.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pinali In reply to greenglassesgirl [2010-09-10 12:33:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much It's kind of difficult to make characters... but I've had a fairly easy time so far, they've just been coming to me, haha

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

OgawaBurukku [2010-09-09 05:43:58 +0000 UTC]

Nice design sheet

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pinali In reply to OgawaBurukku [2010-09-09 06:51:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Daichris0113 [2010-09-09 01:38:08 +0000 UTC]

really cool i wish that good of a drawer, shader, colorer

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pinali In reply to Daichris0113 [2010-09-09 07:26:52 +0000 UTC]

You can be, just takes some years of practice.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Daichris0113 In reply to pinali [2010-09-11 02:59:10 +0000 UTC]

lols yeah ^_^

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

dragonrace [2010-09-09 00:17:57 +0000 UTC]

aw thats a cool design!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pinali In reply to dragonrace [2010-09-10 12:33:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

dragonrace In reply to pinali [2010-09-10 13:47:23 +0000 UTC]

welcome^_^

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

blkwhtrbbt [2010-09-08 23:58:55 +0000 UTC]

got a very button nose. You know, the kind (fan)girls go NUTZ over...
I like the swirly hair too, that was a nice touch. Funnily enough, I didn't note that in the actual comic...

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pinali In reply to blkwhtrbbt [2010-09-09 06:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I drew this at the beginning of July, and looks like I exaggerated the swirly bit in the hair; it's not that prominent in the comic, but it is there, more as a flick than a swirl. I think the full body shot is more like how it is in the comic.

He is pretty "moe" from girls' point of view. At least, I think it's the case, I get a lot of girls going "ohh Eli, so cute/poor thing." XD I think it's good that it appeals to more than just guys, as long as guys don't start viewing him as fangirl bait.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

blkwhtrbbt In reply to pinali [2010-09-09 18:39:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh, they're going to. Trust me on this one. :/ plus, I think you wanted "shotaro", as "moe" applies to little girls. O-o

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pinali In reply to blkwhtrbbt [2010-09-09 18:48:08 +0000 UTC]

I think the definition of "moe" is up for debate I've definitely heard male characters referred to as moe... at, least, on tvtropes:
"male characters can also be moe characters to a female audience"

I think shotaro is a particular type of moe male character, cause when I think of shotaro I think of muuuch younger characters than Eli here, and much more sickeningly cute.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

blkwhtrbbt In reply to pinali [2010-09-09 18:52:57 +0000 UTC]

ah. Well, at any rate, I can't wait for your next update.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

CrystalSerenity [2010-09-08 21:38:34 +0000 UTC]

Lookin' good. I really like the hair and how it's consistent but looks nice; not too short, not too long.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pinali In reply to CrystalSerenity [2010-09-09 06:53:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, for the hair I definitely wanted something in the middle. Anime characters tend to have quite long hair, but I wanted something shorter, while not being so short that it does not suit the character. Thank you!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Stormelle [2010-09-08 20:38:40 +0000 UTC]

I like his happy expressions....His angry and sad/complacent ones scare me a bit...@@; But that is their purpose, I guess....Or something like that....Heh.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

DreamhazeMaster [2010-09-08 19:40:35 +0000 UTC]

He's adorable, innocent and currently a punching bag
I love his design- And Alter's too- He's freaking amazing!

I can't wait to see what plans you have for them- and Eli's "evil dead twin".

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pinali In reply to DreamhazeMaster [2010-09-10 13:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, I can't wait to get to my plans either, bwahaha!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0