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Published: 2005-10-19 23:56:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 718; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 54
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PLEASE AND READ FROM RIGHT TO LEFT!Previous pages;
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Next page;
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Okay! Second page of my manga. Fear my wannabe fake lines that are supposed to emphasize the effect of running and ... as in panel 3 - realisation. This one helped me a lot (as in making a manga). Like ... I COULD DELETE PANEL 2! Sorry, it's just that I hate panel 2, it's the first shot of (panel 1 doesn't count because her eyes are empty) the girl with no shadow cover up and such. And because I wanted her eyes to show that she's 'hot and tired' ... it turned out horrible because I frickin' messed it up.
The only upside of this is the last panel! I would love it if it wasn't for the cheap lines thrown in ... One thing I learned is; NEVER cross a line when doing ... that (forgot what it's called in english .. something with accurlate ... ah nevermind) because it will look like shit if you do.
Well, next page is coming out when I'm not lazy. And that's like - never.