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pipilim97 — The Body Traits Changer (The Device of Swap 1)
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Published: 2016-11-26 12:02:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 177297; Favourites: 212; Downloads: 0
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Description This is the story continue from The Body Traits Changer – The Genius Scientist. This story is happening after 5 years later, after that Jack Jayson returns everyone back to normal in the town except Melissa. Then Jack had hid the powerful device from the peoples and Percy had gone for his long vacation after the chaos. 5 years of hiding, the device finally being found by someone. Who is the person? We will find it in this story and let’s follow the story.

Story Start:
5 years after everything get back to normal. The Device of Swap is being hidden for these years and now there is a boy that found it underground as he is digging a hole in his house yard. The device is put in a box with a note that written as below:
THIS DEVICE HAVING THE POWER TO SWAP PEOPLE’S BODY TRAITS
WHICH MEANS THAT IT CAN SWAP EVERYTHING ABOUT A PEOPLE
PLEASE DON’T USE IT IF YOU FOUND IT
IT WILL CAUSE A BIG TROUBLE TO THE CITY
BUT IF YOU REALLY MISUSE IT, IT CAN REALLY CAUSE A WORLDWIDE PROBLEM.
The boy reads the note and then looks back to the device which looks like a smartphone. Then he decided to …
By the way, before we continue. Let us look about this boy’s identity.
His name is Max William, 14 years old, 5’4 height with normal weight. He having a dad name Harry William, 45 years old, 6’3 height with slightly obese and always not around because he always go for business trip. His mom is name Mary Jones-William, 44 years old, 5’9 height with normal weight, she having nice body curve and well keep her body and look 20 years younger than her real age. Sometimes she will goes to business trips with her husband.

Max has 2 sisters, 1 older than him and another younger. His older sister named Megan William, 20 years old, 5’7 tall with normal weight. She having nice body curve just like her mom and she is good to Max and always taking care of her only brother. Max’s younger sister named Molly William, 12 years old, 4’11 height and she is too skinny. She just hit her puberty and always plays along with Max.

Max having no girlfriend but a crush plus best friend named Shirley Smith, 14 years old, 5’4 height with normal weight. She has a cute face and average body. She is kind to Max and always be there to help him. Ok, we stop here for Max’s identity and we find more in this story.

Max decided to try the device first, so he aims the device toward his younger sister and presses the button capture. Then he can see on the screen all the information of Molly. Then he scans himself with the device and then he drags …
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Comments: 9

AsariGoddess [2020-09-21 10:06:28 +0000 UTC]

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SpontaneousShield366 [2020-07-26 06:19:11 +0000 UTC]

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XDragonLightX [2016-12-04 04:06:50 +0000 UTC]

Whens the next chapter? 

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pipilim97 In reply to XDragonLightX [2016-12-04 04:07:56 +0000 UTC]

Not sure yet. Maybe will be delay a bit due to now I'm having my own stuff to complete first

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AsariGoddess [2016-11-30 23:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Hi, its Triss Merigold from writing.com, your work is great and I know with practise you'll improve even more. I wish you luck and will continue to read your work since body part swapping is my favorite genre.

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pipilim97 In reply to AsariGoddess [2016-12-02 00:28:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your support.

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angus12316 [2016-11-29 05:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Hello Pipilim

I have been reading your works for about three months now and the ideas you have are great but it seems if you are reusing all of your ideas constantly so nothing seems original and the stories get predictable so maybe vary the ages of the characters and or add new swap types for example position in the family or schooling also i find it very hard to understand your stories a lot of the time so i have to re-read it multiple times to understand the story now i understand you are not English but please work on your sentence structure and or punctuation now i understand i am not perfect and there may be some grammatical and or spelling typos but it would make it easier to read your stories.

Thanks 

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angus12316 In reply to angus12316 [2016-11-29 05:09:53 +0000 UTC]

also as far as i know there are three stories that are left with only one chapter:

-the ninja swap
-the magician swap
-undercover agent

i suggest you finish those before you write anymore

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pipilim97 In reply to angus12316 [2016-11-29 07:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Well I will finish the ninja swap and also undercover agent but for the magician swap I already mention that the story will be a chapter and I maybe will continue if I get some ideas on it.

Thanks for your comment and I will improve my work.

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