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Published: 2011-05-14 03:48:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1289; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 26
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I draw this about one year ago i thinksorry about bad writing LOL
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Comments: 15
A little improvements in grammar and maybe dialogue, and this would be flawless.
Nevertheless, hilarious comic. I especially like the accidental rhyming with Serra's "Erk, you jerk!" line LOL.
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improvements like what?
yeah i know i use old fashion english writting
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I'd use something like "Grade 3 English", but whatever.
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Sorry, no offense, I'm just being blunt. Or is blunt wording offensive...
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So cute! (haha, yelling Serra at the end. Love how she looks)
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XD That's hilarious XD And very well drawn too! I like your style!
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