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Published: 2011-10-03 04:18:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 158; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description sand
sand
and more sand
as far as the eye can see

can You put some
sand in an hourglass?
confirm there is
time left for You and Me

You are my
Oasis
in this desert
of dunes and wind

tell me
you are no Mirage
quench my thirst
let me drink you in
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Comments: 5

WaywardGypsy [2011-10-03 20:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to my group... I like the last two stanzas the best!

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pixiebutt14 In reply to WaywardGypsy [2011-10-03 20:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that's the part my friend loved too that I referred to in description well except since this is rework of the original the last two stanzas were

"You are my
oasis
in a desert
of dunes and wind

Let me know
you are no mirage
let me drink you in"

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WaywardGypsy In reply to pixiebutt14 [2011-10-03 20:28:40 +0000 UTC]

oh I see! In any case nice job!

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pixiebutt14 In reply to WaywardGypsy [2011-10-03 20:41:12 +0000 UTC]

ty, i think i like the rework better not that it is that much different

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WaywardGypsy In reply to pixiebutt14 [2011-10-03 20:42:00 +0000 UTC]

yeah gotcha I see what you mean!

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