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pixiebutt14 — Loneliness Illusion
Published: 2011-09-22 00:01:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 226; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description whisper
and
extend a sigh

granules
flow
through the air

wrapping
up
the loneliness

that never
seems
to disappear

pearly
opalescent
tears cascade

into a
never ending
opulent sea

this is
the
perpetual desert

this is
the
prosperous sea

this is
the realm
of loneliness

where
at sometime
everyone
will be
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Comments: 5

chewyraezen [2011-10-02 13:36:45 +0000 UTC]

i can relate. well crafted. enjoyed reading.

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pixiebutt14 In reply to chewyraezen [2011-10-02 13:52:13 +0000 UTC]

Poems like this are rare for me now, like I stated I reworked that poem from an already existing poem from 9-10 years ago.

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mrcbax [2011-09-22 13:51:33 +0000 UTC]

Nice one

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pixiebutt14 In reply to mrcbax [2011-09-22 15:26:23 +0000 UTC]

ty

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mrcbax In reply to pixiebutt14 [2011-09-22 16:40:03 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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