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Published: 2011-10-02 09:04:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 168; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description Measurable Miracles
meander many
Moments

Surreality surpassing
someone's syncopated
soliloquy

Transgressing trials,
and torrential
tribulations

Unbelievable unbalanced
Unequivocal
Unity

Forever Fairytales
formulate in
Fact

Make Moments,
Memories into
Miracles
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Comments: 4

chewyraezen [2011-10-02 13:38:28 +0000 UTC]

this reads like an enjoyable tongue twister. i'd love to hear it read aloud. liked it.

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pixiebutt14 In reply to chewyraezen [2011-10-02 13:49:25 +0000 UTC]

I actually plan on creating an aloud blog, but I am sick. So once I do that I will read it aloud and post a link there for the mp3 of that. I'm really glad you like it though I was really tired when I created it last night.

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chewyraezen In reply to pixiebutt14 [2011-10-02 14:55:18 +0000 UTC]

i am sorry you are sick. i read that on your page. i can relate. i have thyroid cancer and it messes with my body a lot. i know it's not the same thing. and i did really enjoy this. it made me want to write my own poem, which i just did. it's fun playing with words.

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pixiebutt14 In reply to chewyraezen [2011-10-02 15:24:10 +0000 UTC]

I think my cold is allergy related, so no definitely not the same thing. (the hmm notion not the right sentiment but the facial expression I am sure is on the mark)I am greatly sorry to hear about the cancer.

I am extremely glad this poem inspired you though!

I think I prefer to inspire someone rather than my poetry being liked if I had to pick one over the other. Err sorry if this is coming out mentally jumbled...not really myself right now...

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