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Plainoasis — Stranded in the North
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Published: 2015-01-28 15:31:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 1412; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 52
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Speed painting approx. 2 hours.速绘约2小时。
Something just seems wrong with this, would be grateful if you can help me point that/those out.
总感觉哪里不对劲儿，如果能帮我指出我感激不尽。
p.s. I have no idea where they got the firewood...
我不知道他们上哪儿找的柴火...
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One month later buuut...
I would say at first glance the head poportions are off. Twi's head seems much larger than Chrysalis.
I'm guessing Twi is supposed to be closer to the ... I guess camera/viewer point of view but Chrysalis seems too small altogther. She seems to be further away then what I feel the picture is trying to establish. Like she is really 2 feet away from Twi but her body size is saying she is 7 feet away.
Second, Chrysalis's face seems a little... off. Might be that the eyes look as if they have two colors rather than three (pupil, iris, and cornea) Looking realllllly close I honestly can't tell if three colors were used because it looks like dark green and black was used but kinda also looks like the two bleended together. ...or maybe the eyes are a bit too small.
Finally, i'm curious about the ground. Is it ice? Wondering if Twi's body is completly reflected on it since I see her forelegs reflected but can't tell if the rest of her body is.
That's my non-professional, non-expert, not-an-artist opinion on it though lol. Hope it helps in some way!
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Wow, thanks for the detailed critique. After going over the image a few times I found that they are all quite sound, especially the size proportions between characters, I think that is what makes this image looks weird, and would be the first thing to do if I were to fix this image.
Anyway thanks again for the comment, I really need to work on my perspective more.
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Oooo looks like a nice story. (it has Chrissy so it has to be good)
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