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I wish I knew...And had all the answers.
Cause I know what my heart
Shouts out inside of me.
But I know that if
I want someone to hold on to
I'll have to learn to let go...
But my heart cries out
And could I ever let go?
Is is right for me,
And for all who are here?
It's burning a hole in my heart,
Wishing I could change things
That are far beyond my power.
Cause I would hate to let go,
All I know is what I feel,
And what that could maybe be.
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Comments: 28
OctoberAzriel [2008-08-17 14:29:44 +0000 UTC]
Sometimes it's better to let go and move on...
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platinummyr In reply to OctoberAzriel [2008-08-17 23:19:55 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... it was better. Still wish I didn't have to, but it's the way things are.
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OctoberAzriel In reply to platinummyr [2008-08-18 00:41:28 +0000 UTC]
Always have to move on or else you'd be semi-depressed forever.
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living4him [2008-06-12 02:04:58 +0000 UTC]
I can't go on by myself.
No, I can't live without you.
I can't go on...
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living4him In reply to platinummyr [2008-06-18 18:46:13 +0000 UTC]
"Can't Go On" by Monday Morning
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jeannie64 [2008-06-10 15:06:44 +0000 UTC]
great writing hon can i advise on one thing see the last line id take away the maybe hon as it defers from the main statement , but thats just my opinion dear , xxj
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platinummyr In reply to jeannie64 [2008-06-10 15:56:41 +0000 UTC]
It does, however, fit the main purpose of this piece.
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jeannie64 In reply to platinummyr [2008-06-10 19:50:30 +0000 UTC]
ok love gotcha xxj as i said great work babe
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platinummyr In reply to brisni [2008-06-10 02:27:19 +0000 UTC]
If only letting go was a physical action instead of something of the heart. It's so hard the way it is.
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brisni In reply to platinummyr [2008-06-10 12:50:45 +0000 UTC]
I swear I said the same thing to someone a couple of days ago.
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platinummyr In reply to brisni [2008-06-10 14:31:54 +0000 UTC]
Lol, you probably said it to me on here a few days ago
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platinummyr In reply to brisni [2008-10-31 22:13:24 +0000 UTC]
I love that little purple guy
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