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platinummyr — Learn to Let Go
Published: 2008-06-09 06:26:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 221; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 2
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Description I wish I knew...
And had all the answers.
Cause I know what my heart
Shouts out inside of me.
But I know that if
I want someone to hold on to
I'll have to learn to let go...

But my heart cries out
And could I ever let go?
Is is right for me,
And for all who are here?

It's burning a hole in my heart,
Wishing I could change things
That are far beyond my power.
Cause I would hate to let go,

All I know is what I feel,
And what that could maybe be.
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Comments: 28

stan57 [2008-10-31 21:44:30 +0000 UTC]

love this

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platinummyr In reply to stan57 [2008-10-31 22:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for reading!

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OctoberAzriel [2008-08-17 14:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes it's better to let go and move on...

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platinummyr In reply to OctoberAzriel [2008-08-17 23:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... it was better. Still wish I didn't have to, but it's the way things are.

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OctoberAzriel In reply to platinummyr [2008-08-18 00:41:28 +0000 UTC]

Always have to move on or else you'd be semi-depressed forever.

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platinummyr In reply to OctoberAzriel [2008-08-18 00:43:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I have.

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OctoberAzriel In reply to platinummyr [2008-08-18 00:47:40 +0000 UTC]

That's good.

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living4him [2008-06-12 02:04:58 +0000 UTC]

I can't go on by myself.
No, I can't live without you.
I can't go on...

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platinummyr In reply to living4him [2008-06-12 05:54:28 +0000 UTC]

What's that from?

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living4him In reply to platinummyr [2008-06-18 18:46:13 +0000 UTC]

"Can't Go On" by Monday Morning

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platinummyr In reply to living4him [2008-06-18 19:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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jeannie64 [2008-06-10 15:06:44 +0000 UTC]

great writing hon can i advise on one thing see the last line id take away the maybe hon as it defers from the main statement , but thats just my opinion dear , xxj

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platinummyr In reply to jeannie64 [2008-06-10 15:56:41 +0000 UTC]

It does, however, fit the main purpose of this piece.

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jeannie64 In reply to platinummyr [2008-06-10 19:50:30 +0000 UTC]

ok love gotcha xxj as i said great work babe

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MissTooni [2008-06-10 03:25:41 +0000 UTC]

'Tis hard, indeed.

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platinummyr In reply to MissTooni [2008-06-10 03:33:31 +0000 UTC]

Most definitely!

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Paladin343 [2008-06-10 02:17:49 +0000 UTC]

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platinummyr In reply to Paladin343 [2008-06-10 02:35:52 +0000 UTC]

^.^

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Paladin343 In reply to platinummyr [2008-06-10 16:42:04 +0000 UTC]

total thumbsup!

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brisni [2008-06-09 23:25:55 +0000 UTC]

The cry of my heart...

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platinummyr In reply to brisni [2008-06-10 02:27:19 +0000 UTC]

If only letting go was a physical action instead of something of the heart. It's so hard the way it is.

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brisni In reply to platinummyr [2008-06-10 12:50:45 +0000 UTC]

I swear I said the same thing to someone a couple of days ago.

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platinummyr In reply to brisni [2008-06-10 14:31:54 +0000 UTC]

Lol, you probably said it to me on here a few days ago

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brisni In reply to platinummyr [2008-06-10 15:17:57 +0000 UTC]

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platinummyr In reply to brisni [2008-10-31 22:13:24 +0000 UTC]

I love that little purple guy

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platinummyr In reply to brisni [2008-06-10 15:57:54 +0000 UTC]

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CyanSprinkles [2008-06-09 07:04:45 +0000 UTC]

maybe.

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platinummyr In reply to CyanSprinkles [2008-06-09 07:06:08 +0000 UTC]

...

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