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Published: 2009-01-12 04:41:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 357; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 3
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Description Why is it,
That locked away
In the bowels of
A little seashell
We can hear the ocean,

But I can't hear
My heart,
Locked away
Inside of me?

What makes shells
So beautiful,
And my silence
So devastating?

Where do
All these roads lead,
And why do seashells
Mark the bitter
Path from
Shore to shining shore?
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Comments: 36

flawedfairytale [2009-07-21 19:15:17 +0000 UTC]

It's almost melodic, it's so restful to read, despite the questioning within.

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platinummyr In reply to flawedfairytale [2009-07-21 19:32:21 +0000 UTC]

Mmm If I were to have to pick a favorite piece, this one would certainly be in the running.

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simplysamwise [2009-05-04 21:13:03 +0000 UTC]

one of my favorites of yours.
I love the contrast between the seashell and your heart.

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platinummyr In reply to simplysamwise [2009-05-04 22:30:49 +0000 UTC]

This. This I believe is one of (if not the) most favorite pieces of mine. That is, I like this one the most of all that I've written. At least, I think so. But then I remember the others and realize I can't decide. But most of the ones I sent in the note are some of my top favorites.

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simplysamwise In reply to platinummyr [2009-05-04 22:33:31 +0000 UTC]

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losingmyfaith [2009-04-19 07:27:22 +0000 UTC]

love this. that's all i can say (:

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platinummyr In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-04-19 14:39:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I think this is one of my favorites.

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Lilielo-Lawliet [2009-01-31 13:48:54 +0000 UTC]

wow

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platinummyr In reply to Lilielo-Lawliet [2009-01-31 16:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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Lilielo-Lawliet In reply to platinummyr [2009-01-31 16:53:40 +0000 UTC]

your welcome.

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DaughterofZion [2009-01-17 18:04:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I like this... a lot.

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platinummyr In reply to DaughterofZion [2009-01-17 20:37:46 +0000 UTC]

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renia-vandolrin [2009-01-14 01:15:15 +0000 UTC]

beautifully written once again.

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platinummyr In reply to renia-vandolrin [2009-01-14 01:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Hahaa, thanks

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kykiske20022003 [2009-01-13 15:34:53 +0000 UTC]

moi speechless *o*

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platinummyr In reply to kykiske20022003 [2009-01-13 17:21:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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kykiske20022003 In reply to platinummyr [2009-01-14 23:52:14 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^^

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kazumisangel [2009-01-13 01:54:35 +0000 UTC]

How is it that you can hold
Something so vast and wonderful
In the palm of your hand?

And how is it that that sound
Can travel hundreds of miles
Just to please your ear?

How is that you can hear it
Even when far away from you ear
But no one else around you can?

And how is it that you can't seem to hear
The sound of your heart's pound
When I know it's loud enough for me?

Just a chain of events, simply put
Put them in the right order for me
Rearange, you'll find the secret

You can't hear your heart
I can hear it perfectly fine, you're alive
Perhaps you can hear my beat better

Your ear to my heart, my ear to that shell
Connection of love makes it possible
Hear the pounding waves of the ocean that I love

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platinummyr In reply to kazumisangel [2009-01-13 20:50:47 +0000 UTC]

I can't hold something
Vast and powerful in my hand,
Only the shadow of the glorious
Wonder that we find.

Though I hear and enjoy
The many sounds that travel far,
I do not think they are
There to please me. I am
Not worth that much.

Maybe cause I'm just one
Listener in a crowd of shouters,
Or maybe because I hear
The sounds of silence.

I know that I can't hear my heart,
Because the sound of yours
Overpowers my simple beat.

I found the secret by leaving
Everything the way it is.
Only I have rearranged.

Perhaps my heart is silence,
And listening for the sounds
Of those who are beautiful?

That shell to your ear,
Your heart to my ear,
Connection beyond the realm
Of impossibility,
That is the sound of ocean waves
Which dance to our tune.

Woah, it took me so long to get the courage to answer that Thanks so much, Kazu Glad you enjoyed my poem this much. Take a stab at this one

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kazumisangel In reply to platinummyr [2009-01-24 21:51:08 +0000 UTC]

The ocean is neutral
It does not judge,
It does not view
But it deemed you worthy
Because we all know you are.

You are the one listener
Amongst thousands of speakers
And the ocean hears you listen
It knows, it knows, it knows

And I've seen the power you hold
In those hands of yours
So gentle and soft
So strong and protective
It radiates from within your skin

And though you hold shadows
You can turn them into light
You make that wonder come
You know, you know, you know

And who has more silence
Than that one single listener?
You are silent and stoic
You are ever hearing, listening
Your silence is everything

Over you silence, I hear it
The beauty that shines within
The tune that becomes your music
I know, I know, I know

You say you can't hear the beat
Of your own heart inside
But it lives on in happiness
But it lives on in despair
I can hear it, it's there

You say you can only hear mine
But the reason is much deeper
We hear them beat together, as one
We know, we know, we know

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platinummyr In reply to kazumisangel [2009-01-24 22:25:12 +0000 UTC]

I listen
When others speak.

You hold me,
When others flee.

What does that make us?

And maybe we can't hear
Because we're both beating
In the same simple pattern.

Thump, thump thump.

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kazumisangel In reply to platinummyr [2009-02-09 02:00:14 +0000 UTC]

And what are we
Other than what we are
And what we make each other

If we are that same step
And that same constant rhythm
I am you, you are I,

Opposites that fit together
In the way that puzzles fit
One makes up what the other lacks

We are the beat we set for ourselves

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platinummyr In reply to kazumisangel [2009-02-09 02:55:57 +0000 UTC]

You are everything I'm not,
In a strange and
Twisting way,

It makes no sense,
But the world
Is funny this way.

Just because
We step in tune
Doesn't mean
That we are the same,
By far,
It just means we want
To find the other first.

I am the beat
That is set for me

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kazumisangel In reply to platinummyr [2009-02-16 18:22:48 +0000 UTC]

And you are everything I am
Because what contrasts is the same
Two strands forever entwined

Who said the world makes sense?
Instead, we laugh
Irony is our best joke

But because we step in tune
We can't help but be the same
Coincidence, fate, destiny
The paths have crossed
One single step
Is all it takes

You are the beat
That is set for you
I am the beat
That is set for me
Together, we are
Our own syncopation.

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platinummyr In reply to kazumisangel [2009-02-16 18:41:17 +0000 UTC]

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dynamitehackr416 [2009-01-12 22:15:45 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful! As always. You always find the perfect words to string together. It's so wonderful

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platinummyr In reply to dynamitehackr416 [2009-01-12 22:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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living4him [2009-01-12 07:12:37 +0000 UTC]

How lovely

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platinummyr In reply to living4him [2009-01-12 07:20:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Lauren!

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Rojozorra [2009-01-12 06:52:13 +0000 UTC]

what's your major again?

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platinummyr In reply to Rojozorra [2009-01-12 07:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, Computer Science. Strange, I know.

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Rojozorra In reply to platinummyr [2009-01-12 21:57:50 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm nursing. Haha so I understand the strange bit.

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platinummyr In reply to Rojozorra [2009-01-12 22:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Haha.

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Rojozorra In reply to platinummyr [2009-01-13 03:41:25 +0000 UTC]

XD

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ALovelyMeInside [2009-01-12 04:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Tis awesome.

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platinummyr In reply to ALovelyMeInside [2009-01-12 04:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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