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Published: 2009-01-02 06:39:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 410; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 6
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Description Washed in blood
will you ever be set free,
Of pain so great
in your bitter heart?

Wishing and waiting
Someday to find
That your Justice
is done.

I'm not saying
that what he did
is right!

But was I?
Were you?
Is anyone?



No



We have tongues
Like vipers,
Hands of Iron
and Fists of steel.

Words now soft
and ever pleasing to the ear
are turned to Poison
in the whispers of
Hatred and Despair

Smack went the Hammer,
As Thunk went the Nail.
It was my hand, your hand, Our hands
That drove it home.
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Comments: 24

Sarinsky [2009-12-18 23:28:53 +0000 UTC]

amazing.. you're a great writer..Love it.

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platinummyr In reply to Sarinsky [2009-12-19 06:42:18 +0000 UTC]

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skyeconnelly [2009-12-01 20:13:34 +0000 UTC]

Really enjoyed this one too..

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platinummyr In reply to skyeconnelly [2009-12-01 23:24:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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MidnyghtLilith [2009-01-23 02:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Interesting... *ponders*....

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platinummyr In reply to MidnyghtLilith [2009-01-23 03:28:59 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm

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Sao-irse [2009-01-09 21:53:23 +0000 UTC]

share your skills?
:3

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platinummyr In reply to Sao-irse [2009-01-10 11:09:59 +0000 UTC]

Wish I could.

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Sao-irse In reply to platinummyr [2009-01-11 07:11:41 +0000 UTC]

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platinummyr In reply to Sao-irse [2009-01-11 07:15:42 +0000 UTC]

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renia-vandolrin [2009-01-06 19:37:11 +0000 UTC]

very touching

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platinummyr In reply to renia-vandolrin [2009-01-06 20:37:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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kazumisangel [2009-01-03 17:50:40 +0000 UTC]

"We have tongues
Like vipers,
Hands of iron,
And fists of steel.
Words now soft,
And ever pleasing
To the ear," I love this verse, it's so sad and so true. We love to croon sweet things to others and destroy them while their eyes are closed.

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platinummyr In reply to kazumisangel [2009-01-03 17:51:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...

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blown-into-oblivian [2009-01-03 05:19:34 +0000 UTC]

very powerful

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platinummyr In reply to blown-into-oblivian [2009-01-03 05:34:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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blown-into-oblivian In reply to platinummyr [2009-01-03 19:23:41 +0000 UTC]

^^

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One-Yellow-Flower [2009-01-03 04:01:45 +0000 UTC]

oh wow

this is my favourite so far <3
esp the last stanza...

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platinummyr In reply to One-Yellow-Flower [2009-01-03 05:34:49 +0000 UTC]

<3 Yeah... this is probably one of my most favorite pieces

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ALovelyMeInside [2009-01-02 16:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Very moving, very.

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platinummyr In reply to ALovelyMeInside [2009-01-02 18:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Rojozorra [2009-01-02 07:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Interesting.

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platinummyr In reply to Rojozorra [2009-01-02 07:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Rojozorra In reply to platinummyr [2009-01-02 07:33:31 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome

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