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WegaBlueSun [2015-07-22 00:52:59 +0000 UTC]

This is a remarkable portrait. You've got Lily's 70's look dead on! I once had a shorter version of this hair style ... yes, I am that old. 
What I like about this picture is that you didn't make Lily too pretty, nor did you make Severus too ugly. Many artists fall into that trap, and the characters end up too cartoony.
Here you've caught two young people during a discussion, and they seem none too happy. Esp. Snape! 

I do think his hair should be a bit flatter, it's got that manga-style kink at the sides of his forehead. His nose could be more "hooky", but he's just a kid at this stage.

The dark red shadow on the tip of Lily's nose is a bit too sharp, esp. on full view. And the color on her upper lip is blobby, looks like someone busted her one in the mouth!

But all things considered, this is great work and I've faved it!

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