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Published: 2008-12-19 00:23:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1597; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 1
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My lips trace a poemOver your fragrant skin
The verses leaving you languid and warm.
I tuck words into all of your soft spots -
A noun nestled under the delicate arch of your foot
A verb balanced gently over the swell of your hip
Two perfect adjectives strategically arched over your breasts
And adverbs in a long trail down your thigh
My tongue is the instrument that connects them
And strings them together
Word for word; letter for letter
A run on sentence of my wanton desire
Syllables trailing off the pale parchment of your body.
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great job i loved it!!
hopefully i can write like that one day
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That is very kind of you and I appreciate it.
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Thanks very much, my love! I am honored to be included!
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My pleasure love! I really liked that piece and thought it deserved attention
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Thanks very much. That is very high praise...
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wow, this is just beautiful!
I'm not much of a dev literature reader, but I happened to stumble upon this and I'm glad I did, actualy!
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Thanks so much - I really appreciate it!
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very nice
i've noticed that you write a lot of your poems for Victoria
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Thanks! Yes, I do...she is my muse.
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no prob, it sounds like you really love her
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Very beautiful words... I love it... Well done.
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Thanks very much - I appreciate it.
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Victoria sounds like she has a nice life...
This is intimate...delicately so, almost in a fragile way. The construction of it, the imagery and the wording is strong; but the actual content is quite delicate. (in my opinion...) I interpret this also as mildly mischievous because of it's mild implications. I like it.
- S.H.
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Thanks very much! It is a bit more classically romantic than what I usually do....
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*laughs* Yes I soon noted...I still really find this amazing.
- S.H.
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Very clever. Love it. Bet you never had a problem finding a study partner...
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*Chuckles* I always asked for extra homework...
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*laughs* Gives new meaning to grading on the curve...
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Excellent! You might consider hyphenating "run on." It would help the flow, in my opinion, but that's minor-minor.
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Good point! Thanks...
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so beautiful and simple...loving and reverant.
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Ooh, I just love this. [yeah, yeah, listen to the book nerd. 9.9 
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Make that two book nerds... *Winks*
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