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Published: 2012-01-01 15:38:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 4553; Favourites: 275; Downloads: 42
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Description The secret life
of elm and oak
and thin white poplars -
elegant apostles
on a winter night,
grazing the moon
like tapers in December.

I smell earth -
peat and cedar
and the indulgent bulge
of maple,
crafting the air
like a smith
lost in his work.
Chestnuts bear an offering
and the yearning pall
of pine scents the sky
till it's thick with resin.

And they gather
with boughs and limbs
bent like priests at play,
roots tight as ancient drums
to ruminate on stories,
sinewed in fragrant bark
making merry where
the green bends back
the world.
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Comments: 63

Poetrymann In reply to ??? [2012-02-11 23:19:54 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks - I appreciate it!

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LiliWrites [2012-02-03 15:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Someone believed you deserve a DD! Your work has been featured here as a result!

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Poetrymann In reply to LiliWrites [2012-02-09 02:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again! I really appreciate that!

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AlienDirector [2012-01-28 20:43:51 +0000 UTC]

amazing work!well done!

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Poetrymann In reply to AlienDirector [2012-02-03 15:14:44 +0000 UTC]

I am very glad you like it - thanks!

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chryssalis [2012-01-25 19:41:40 +0000 UTC]

The way you write is amazing!!

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Poetrymann In reply to chryssalis [2012-02-03 15:08:33 +0000 UTC]

That is very nice of you to say - many thanks.

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IsabellaMichel [2012-01-14 08:40:08 +0000 UTC]

This is a strong one sir. Just thought I'd let you know. ^^

Especially love

"I smell earth -
peat and cedar
and the indulgent bulge
of maple,
crafting the air
like a smith
lost in his work."

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Poetrymann In reply to IsabellaMichel [2012-01-20 14:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. A little green in the cold winter.

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TheDarkenedBride [2012-01-05 20:16:27 +0000 UTC]

I love trees very much and believe in their power what a nice subject to write about

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Poetrymann In reply to TheDarkenedBride [2012-01-07 23:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I am very glad you like it!

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TheDarkenedBride In reply to Poetrymann [2012-01-07 23:51:10 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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rRAKHI [2012-01-05 13:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Very classic feel to this .

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Poetrymann In reply to rRAKHI [2012-01-07 23:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I am very glad you like it!

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rRAKHI In reply to Poetrymann [2012-01-08 07:23:48 +0000 UTC]

I must tell you your poems have a very classic feel to them,unlike modern poetry(i starve to see that)very Victorian era sorta.Modern Poetry is informal and there is dearth of creativity,but your poems are masterpieces in itself.I kinda breathe when i read you.A bow.

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ElfFriend1 [2012-01-04 03:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is beautiful! I half-expect to turn around and see a scop reciting this in some ancient hall- it has that feel to it.

I really enjoy your use of language. It's sophisticated, but you don't overuse words- you say just enough to paint the picture, and let the words you have do that job. Which they do beautifully.

This piece reminds me of Susan Cooper (if you've read her books, The Dark is Rising series. If you haven't, LOOK THEM UP! )

I really really enjoyed this piece! Beautifully done!

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Poetrymann In reply to ElfFriend1 [2012-01-07 23:02:55 +0000 UTC]

That is incredibly kind of you - many thanks!

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Mordial33 [2012-01-03 14:19:13 +0000 UTC]

This poem is very well written. And I love the photo. I added the picture to my favorites.

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Poetrymann In reply to Mordial33 [2012-01-05 16:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks. I wanted to start 2012 with something uplifting!

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Mordial33 In reply to Poetrymann [2012-01-06 12:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Well, I think you did a very good job about that. All of your poems (that I have had the time to read!) are amazing, but this is one of your better ones. Keep working at it and happy new year!

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icedoll101 [2012-01-02 23:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written and just amazing. I it!!

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Poetrymann In reply to icedoll101 [2012-01-03 17:44:00 +0000 UTC]

I am very glad you enjoyed it - many thanks. Happy 2012!

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Villenueve [2012-01-02 22:25:32 +0000 UTC]

Magnificent poem my dearest friend!,I loved what you wrote!

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Poetrymann In reply to Villenueve [2012-01-05 15:59:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Something cheery for 2012!

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KaysThoughts [2012-01-02 16:00:24 +0000 UTC]

wonderful work

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Poetrymann In reply to KaysThoughts [2012-01-03 17:43:41 +0000 UTC]

I am very glad you enjoyed it - many thanks. Happy 2012!

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KaysThoughts In reply to Poetrymann [2012-01-03 21:22:28 +0000 UTC]

I wish you a Happy New Year too and you're very welcome

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LancelotPrice [2012-01-02 11:55:44 +0000 UTC]

That really celebrates romantic connection with the earth and life. Thanks for writing it, Brendan.

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Poetrymann In reply to LancelotPrice [2012-01-02 15:58:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! That was what I was going for, along with something to wake up the senses.

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j0rosa [2012-01-02 11:19:50 +0000 UTC]

Happy blessed 2012!!!

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Poetrymann In reply to j0rosa [2012-01-02 15:58:23 +0000 UTC]

The same to you - I hope yours is wonderful!

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dangerousemo123 [2012-01-02 03:49:17 +0000 UTC]

That was beautiful!!!!!!!

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Poetrymann In reply to dangerousemo123 [2012-01-02 15:58:04 +0000 UTC]

I am glad you like it - thanks!

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Photobunni [2012-01-02 02:11:08 +0000 UTC]

Nice free verse. Love the imagery.

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Poetrymann In reply to Photobunni [2012-01-02 15:57:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And Happy New Years!

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HannahDklov14 [2012-01-02 01:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Bravissimo

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Poetrymann In reply to HannahDklov14 [2012-01-02 15:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks - I appreciate that!

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alapip [2012-01-02 01:15:06 +0000 UTC]

unusually fine effort, Branden!

[and, i commented and faved the photo, too]

pip

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Poetrymann In reply to alapip [2012-01-02 15:57:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I really like the photo!

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JirachitheGreat [2012-01-01 23:59:58 +0000 UTC]

That's...beautiful...
O_O

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Poetrymann In reply to JirachitheGreat [2012-01-02 15:56:46 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate that - thanks!

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Ane-Bonazza [2012-01-01 23:20:52 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.. *--*

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Poetrymann In reply to Ane-Bonazza [2012-01-02 15:56:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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Ane-Bonazza In reply to Poetrymann [2012-08-24 19:02:59 +0000 UTC]

x3

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PaperDreamerArt [2012-01-01 21:42:37 +0000 UTC]

Very descriptive; I could smell and taste it! It goes so well with the image.

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Poetrymann In reply to PaperDreamerArt [2012-01-02 15:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I was hoping it would be a nice assault on the senses.

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wh0rem0ans [2012-01-01 19:06:06 +0000 UTC]

I do love trees and their conversations.

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Poetrymann In reply to wh0rem0ans [2012-01-02 15:55:56 +0000 UTC]

So do I! Happy New Years!

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wh0rem0ans In reply to Poetrymann [2012-01-02 18:51:42 +0000 UTC]

Happy New Year

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Oceanriver [2012-01-01 19:05:18 +0000 UTC]

that's an amazing poem!!!

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