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Published: 2019-04-13 00:57:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 452; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 1
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One of the Seven Primordials. Along with The Freak, Harlequin, Mime, Illusionist, Acrobat, and Tamer. Later becoming part of the Tenebrous Troupe.Related content
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- This artwork piece looks good, but I do have a some critiques about the proportions of the character. The arms look too long for the character, and it looks like she would fall over and wobble. Slightly shorter arms would look better.
- The second critique is her hands. Her hands looks almost as big as her head, and it looks a tad bit odd in my opinion. Making the hands a bit smaller would look a bit more pleasing.
- Shading. The shading looks interesting. I've certainly haven't seen shading like this before, which making it unique. The overlapping of the different shades of colours makes it pleasing to the eye, but a slight blend between those would make it look less confusing. It looks like the character has multiple different colours all over the body instead of it being a shading technique.
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Pretty good :3. She wasn't really meant to be proportional per say. The features are exaggerated for a reason. The disproportions are calculated :3 The Seven Primordials are meant to be otherworldly. Familiar but different. :3
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Oooohhh- like sorta cartoony?
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Sorta is the word I'd use, yeah :3
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Thank you for the input! I'll make sure to keep that in mind for my future critiques-Β
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All right!! Fly the imagination in all your work. In this critique, Iβm going to speak on this one.
We are before a character full of energy. Its "pink" color proves it.
His happy face tells us how evil could be contained. Its eyes, so beautiful, are nothing but deceit. It wants to be feared. The more understanding it is, the more terrible its action will be. Attitude achieved, it shows in the entire design.
The position of the finger of its right hand, clearly, shows power over you. It is a perfect idea that accompanies everything described.
The detail of the heart gives us the illusion of a loving being.
Another villain comes to light to be part of a great team: The seven primordial.
Sincerely, it attracts. Follow this path. You are doing very well!!
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And so very awesome.
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Well, I just made the logo.
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Saw it and faved it :3
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