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Polterrgeist β€” Copernicus

Published: 2012-03-31 07:02:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 23870; Favourites: 545; Downloads: 55
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Description My entry for 's Fatal Phantom contestΒ 
It goes with a story: www.fanfiction.net/s/7973728/1…
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Comments: 52

Polterrgeist In reply to ??? [2012-04-04 23:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Eeeheehee I'm making so many people cry. Mission accomplished C:l

...But yeah I wouldn't mind going after the parents with a bat, they could use a smack or two

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Falljoydelux [2012-04-03 03:55:48 +0000 UTC]

You made me cry, and that's saying something. It takes a lot for me to cry, and it totally came at the right moment.

*sniff* YOU ARE AMAZING!!

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Polterrgeist In reply to Falljoydelux [2012-04-04 23:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! C>

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Fionna12 [2012-04-02 21:50:57 +0000 UTC]

I have one question: What happened to Sam and Tucker??

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Polterrgeist In reply to Fionna12 [2012-04-04 23:28:25 +0000 UTC]

I can't remember if they were mentioned in the official story or not, but in my mind I like to think they went off to their own colleges, leaving Phantom all alone :c

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Fionna12 In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-04-04 23:30:45 +0000 UTC]

But should Danny still have contact with Sam or then again Tucker??

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Polterrgeist In reply to Fionna12 [2012-04-04 23:39:53 +0000 UTC]

I think both of them would. But if Sam or Tucker went to colleges that were out of state, they'd have no idea what's going on with Phantom, especially since he doesn't want to tell anybody what's going on. IDK lmao

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Fionna12 In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-04-04 23:57:37 +0000 UTC]

But Tucker can't go to college, he's the mayor of Danny's town, remember?

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Polterrgeist In reply to Fionna12 [2012-04-05 00:13:35 +0000 UTC]

OH SNAP YOU'RE RIGHT!

What a tweest!

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Fionna12 In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-04-05 00:30:39 +0000 UTC]

It's ok but also Sam would probably go to the same college.

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koushiroizumi2005 [2012-04-02 05:30:58 +0000 UTC]

God dang.... I read the whole thing.... It was 5am when I read it but I just couldn't put it down..... It's a really awesome piece of writing....

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Polterrgeist In reply to koushiroizumi2005 [2012-04-04 23:48:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! :0

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spectrumofcolours [2012-04-02 05:06:08 +0000 UTC]

i cried a waterfall.
this is just so touching

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Polterrgeist In reply to spectrumofcolours [2012-04-04 23:48:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! :3c

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spectrumofcolours In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-04-04 23:54:15 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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2numagirls [2012-04-01 05:45:12 +0000 UTC]

FFFFSHHHHDKLSJFLDK


ALL THE FEELS.

SO MANY OF THEM.

YOU BETTER WIN HOLY CRAPSCICLE.

Arrghshklfjdlkjdlv everything is SOGOODSOGOOD ABOUT THIS NNNNNNN <3333

THE COLORS MAKE ME CREYS AND THE ANGST MAKES MY FACE EXPLOOOODE

This is the best oAAAo

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Polterrgeist In reply to 2numagirls [2012-04-04 23:52:02 +0000 UTC]

/AAAALLLL/ THE FEELS?

DGHSDJDFKH BABBU DON'T EXPLODE ON ME THAT WON'T BE GOOD ;________;
IT'S JUST.
I LOVE
ANGST
SO VERY MUCH AND ALL I WANNA DO IS MAKE ERRBODY SOB PUDDLES OF SAD KITTENS
HOW ANGSTY IS A SAD KITTEN? VERY. THAT'S HOW MUCH ANGST I WANT BUT STILL DON'T ASPLODE ON ME I NEED YOUR PRECIOUS EYEBALLS FOR A SCIENCE EXPERIMENT BECAUSE YOLO

Thank you pancaaake C>

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MadHatterMCR [2012-04-01 03:35:19 +0000 UTC]

Aaaw!!! I love this! I feel so bad for Phantom. Just want to give him a cuddle and tea to cheer him up. Shame on the parents...

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Polterrgeist In reply to MadHatterMCR [2012-04-02 01:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And yeah, the poor thing :c Tea and cuddles seems like an A+ cheering up plan though!

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NoviceComics [2012-04-01 01:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Love the story to pieces. The idea was great and the delivery was... well fair at best. There are several grammatical errors to be addressed and you are missing comas in some key places to help it flow. Other than that, it had my attention in a full head lock and I could not look away.

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Polterrgeist In reply to NoviceComics [2012-04-02 01:33:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Lmao I really need to get a beta or something, I have such a hard time finding all my errors And would you have any recommendations on how to deliver it better? I noticed that it was sort of off, but I didn't know how to fix it. Any tiiips? <:

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NoviceComics In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-04-02 02:41:16 +0000 UTC]

If you really want me to help it flow, I'd end up going through the whole thing and editing it a bit. If you are okay with me doing this, give me permission, if not, oh well. I know there are a few commas needed in the last paragraph for sure.

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Polterrgeist In reply to NoviceComics [2012-04-04 22:51:39 +0000 UTC]

You'd really do that? Oh snap that would be incredibly awesome of you! Yes, please!

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mimidan [2012-03-31 21:33:34 +0000 UTC]

EPIC PICTUREEE *0*

*dies*

your too awesomeee

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Polterrgeist In reply to mimidan [2012-03-31 21:43:08 +0000 UTC]

YOU COMMENT ON LIKE
ALL MY PICTURES

Do you know how amazing you are
Like f'reals I'm so bad when it comes to commenting, HOW DO YOU DO IT. Tell me your secret hhhnngg
But if there's anybody that should be awesome it's you, I don't think you know how much I appreciate all the comments you leave me and stuff fdjhd
I LAV U ;A;

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mimidan In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-03-31 22:01:08 +0000 UTC]

ME AWESOME?!!!!!!!!!!!

*flails*

YOUR THE ONE THATS AWESOMEEEEEEEEEE DUDEEE

T-T i feel so honoreddd

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vedisdragon [2012-03-31 19:28:31 +0000 UTC]

OMG! I WANNA BLAZE JACK AND MADDIE DOWN WITH AN ECTOGUN RIGHT NOW!!!
*huggles* awww phantom!

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Polterrgeist In reply to vedisdragon [2012-03-31 21:20:13 +0000 UTC]

ME TOO THAT POOR BABY ;A;
They need a swift kick in the butt l:C

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vedisdragon In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-04-01 00:54:14 +0000 UTC]

LETS GO TORCH THEIR FACES!! *grabs blowtorch*

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DragonsAndDP [2012-03-31 16:58:44 +0000 UTC]

Dude, I'm crying.
Crying.

Stories don't ever do that to me, especially fanfiction.
But this... this is the first ever piece of writing to make me cry. It's so moving and emotional, not only that but the plain DICTION you have in your words... and the picture...

Everything in this deviation does nothing short of BLOWING MY MIND.

...I need a minute.
Just... yeah, I'll need a few moments.
I can't even leave the usual spazzy comment right now otl

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Polterrgeist In reply to DragonsAndDP [2012-03-31 21:25:07 +0000 UTC]

I AM MAKING PEOPLE HAVE /SO MANY FEELS/

omg I'm like... incredibly glad that it's making you cry though, I was so scared I couldn't get the emotion across. BUT GOD I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL THOUGH. I've read a lot of fics and while some may make me tear up, only one has made my cry like a baby.

But like... /thank you/ though, that really does mean a lot. I'm still new to this whole writing thing and I have no clue what I'm doing, so having you say that just makes me feel so much better. Thank you thank you thank you LET ME LOVE ALL OVER YOU.

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DragonsAndDP In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-04-01 04:57:40 +0000 UTC]

YES
YES YOU ARE XDD

But damn girl you have SKILL.
YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE OFTEN!
AND YOU ARE VERY WELCOME FRAND

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sry005 [2012-03-31 16:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, I'm gonna read that fanfic later when I have time. c:

Awesome pic! Especially the background--Butch's backgrounds may look simple, but they're actually really really hard. And as usual great job with the style. c;

And--wait
You named this Copernicus?! LOL Any reason why?

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Polterrgeist In reply to sry005 [2012-03-31 21:17:36 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOLD RIGHT???? Dude I never ever thought about how much TIME must go into the backgrounds until I drew one. TOOK FOREVER LOL. It was wicked hard otllll
BUT THANK YOUU you are the nicest ;_;

It's part of a little speech Danny gives to Phantom to cheer him up. I decided to name the story after it because it was p. much what made Phantom change his outlook on everything, but I don't wanna give too much away. When you read it, you'll see!

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sry005 In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-03-31 21:21:15 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome, dear~ c; I tried once to vector a DP background... yeah no hahaaa
Very much cudos for you for actually managing it.

Oh, no, I read it now. xD I understand that part. (Great speech btw! You're really great at writing.) But why Copernicus? Because Danny's space obsession?

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Polterrgeist In reply to sry005 [2012-03-31 21:40:20 +0000 UTC]

AAAAH VECTORS.
Tried vectoring once. Never trying it again. It was freaking hard man :C
I prolly screwed it up a bit because idk what I'm doing BUT I'M OK WITH THAT LOL. idk who does the backgrounds for DP but they need all my love >:0

asdf thank you omgah ;_; And yeah! I figured it would be easier for Danny to use a space analogy because they're both space dorks and it'll hit home a little more, and because it's a really good example.
...Plus I like space lB

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sry005 In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-03-31 21:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Vectors ahahaahaaahaha...
never again
Hey, if I didn't know this was fanart, I'd totally think that bg was official. I'm not even kidding. 8I

You're welcome! And it does make sense. I was just wondering because I was doing that Copernicus project while you were doing this and I'm pretty sure I mentioned it... either that or you're psychic lol.
I love space too. I can go on and on about space and stars and white dwarfs and how dense they are and supernovas and hypernovas and black holes and dark matter and Einstein's theory of general relativity and nebulae and red giants and that mysterious black circle on neptune and the dwarf planet in the asteroid belt and

...
I like space. 8I

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vedisdragon In reply to sry005 [2012-03-31 19:27:53 +0000 UTC]

READ IT.
THATS WHY.

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sry005 In reply to vedisdragon [2012-03-31 20:37:12 +0000 UTC]

There's no need to e-yell, lol.

There IS reason as to why I asked, and, now that I have read the story, there still is a reason as to why I asked~

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Kvalificatsia [2012-03-31 12:45:14 +0000 UTC]

OMG wow! This is so gorgeous! The way you use BH style, the way you show them emotions! This is so freaking adorable!

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Polterrgeist In reply to Kvalificatsia [2012-03-31 21:25:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! And yeah, you gotta love their adorkableness :'B

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Suzzykitty [2012-03-31 09:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! I... I don't know what to say about it except it's amazing and I agree with *Tails232323 it is a great brotherly moment ^^

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Polterrgeist In reply to Suzzykitty [2012-03-31 21:26:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh thank you! C>

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Suzzykitty In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-04-01 05:33:30 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^

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Tails232323 [2012-03-31 09:02:15 +0000 UTC]

Certainly a great brotherly moment! The ending is very nice and I love the drawing, shows the intense argument between the two.

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Polterrgeist In reply to Tails232323 [2012-03-31 21:27:56 +0000 UTC]

YOU ARE SO KIND AAAAAH ;_; asdf thank you C>
I still can't get over how you had all those people in Echo's stream reading the thing, YOU ARE SO TERRIBLE AHAHA :'D

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Tails232323 In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-04-01 06:49:20 +0000 UTC]

You better not hide girl! >:3 Show all of your stuph!

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SpazSenpai [2012-03-31 08:07:55 +0000 UTC]

Words escape me, my dear.

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Polterrgeist In reply to SpazSenpai [2012-03-31 21:28:36 +0000 UTC]

-bows-
Thank you so much, my dearest Spaz! <3

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SpazSenpai In reply to Polterrgeist [2012-04-01 06:33:56 +0000 UTC]

You've introduced a whole new genre that can and likely will be used in Fatal Phantom and side stories: racism. I never realized how it could be used, and now, it's totally awesome! (not that racism is awesome, just the concept that everyone is racist against ghosts) I was kinda already planning on throwing something like that in the side story of Phantom trying to find a job, but I didn't know it could be used to that extent. The wheels in my head, they be turning, lol.

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