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[Edit] Fixed the arms a bit. Thanks to everyone who noticed it! xDThis took way longer than it should have. Those flowers can go play in traffic
So yeah, these are some of the OCs from my current story, Jun [bottom left] and Rรกn [top right]. I wanted to draw a light hearted scene, as I've been doing a lot of dark, boring frontal shots lately, and I thought that these two would fit it best.
But dang, I had no idea the flowers would take this long. I practically spent three days just drawing each flower individually... if I have to draw another freaking flower, I swear
Feel free to comment / critique! I realize this is ridden with mistakes, so go ahead and point them out to me xD
Oh, and Jun and Rรกn belong to me *u*
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good work, i like the flower eye patch lol but one thing i noticed is that Jun's biceps seem way to long and it looks kind of awkward lol other then that your effort with the flowers was worth it
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Thanks!! :] Aha, yeaaah that's been pointed out to me a few times. I was trying to go for the effect that her forearms were folded on her stomach, so it would seem smaller anyway... but in the end, the arm is still too long regardless xD; It's been brought up a lot, so I may end up changing it... oh boy xD Thanks for the critique!
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lol no problem, good luck with the change XD
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Ahaha thanks! It's been fixed, I hope it looks better now XDDD
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lol it does look better but would you hate me if i pointed one more thing out XD
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LOL! Uhhhh we'll see, go for it xD
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i think you should move the hands up the body some more because if you try actually folding your hands over like that they would be right over the center of the breast but even if you don't it looks great
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Yeaaaah... actually, I was going to move it up a little bit more, but then if I did that I'd have to fix up the biceps too and at the time I was satisfied with just this! xDD Hey, I appreciate all the critique haha xDD You're a good anatomy teacher! *u*
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im just glad i could help out
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lol! You really told flowers to play in traffic? Thats.....a low blow man.
....Yeah they're annoying huh?! I don't know why I drew them so often. Srs. Super srs...
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Hey bro, if you know my pain you shouldn't judge me
Aren't they?? It's so repetitive and there's....so...many...of them *A* You must enjoy pain, you flower masochist
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dayumnn. i gotta get me a flower eye patch too.
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xD I'd wear one if I didn't have an eye, that's for sure
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I wish I could draw hands like you, I really do C':
Now.. those flowers.. xD Congratulations! You have the patience of a god. Nice job spacing out the colors, it looks really good C:
I love how you did Ran's hair. There's so much of it and so much going on xD
Keep going with this style, it's really unique and I like it!
(btw, I see the others commenting on Jun's arms. I don't think they're really that off, it's just a perspective issue xD)
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Whaaat?? Pssh, no I'm really bad at hands!! xD Don't wish to draw them like me!
LOL thank you!! I can't tell you how badly I wanted to copy-paste them all and get them over with xDDD Thanks to you for always looking at all the WIPs I sent x'D Ahh, yeah, her hair was the most fun!! So long and wavy *u*
Really?? I'm glad!! Ohh, haha yeah I think so too... especially since I used my own arms as models... though yeah, they could've been a tad shorter xD;
You always write the most meaningful comments. Thank you ;]
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Shut up, you're good xD
You're welcome! Anytime you wanna share a pic I'm more than happy to see C:
Maybe a little shorter, but it looks fine~
I try C;
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I'm really not xDD If they look good, then it's a gosh darn miracle ok? xD
Whoo~! Same goes for you 8D
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This is very pretty! 
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Thanks!! Oh yes it is!! =_= Ohh, haha yeah that's true xD The thing is, the forearm is sort of at an angle so it's wrapping onto her stomach, so it appears shorter. Though, I probably should shade it to make it more apparent xD Thanks for noticing!!
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You're very welcome!
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xD well you're right in the aspect that they're probably still too long even with the arms folding onto the stomach, but I think I'm just going to leave it be xD They are, aren't they?? It sucks!! xP Hopefully my anatomy class will help me *u*
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Lol, yeah after I finish a pic and see mistakes in them I wanna fix them but I don't because I'm to lazy to, and it's to hard to go back and fix them XD Yeah they are! But they need to be practiced even tho I don't wanna XD Nice, I haven't taken any anatomy classes before. I'm sure it will be helpful
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LOL that...that's exactly it! XD If I went back to shorten them a little, I'd have to fix not only the arm, but also the forearm [I made it a separate layer because it was on top of the clothing while the skin layer was below the clothes layer] and patch up the clothes layer AND draw more flowers where the arm used to be... and I am not drawing any more flowers Yeaaah, but hopefully with practice we get better :] I hope so!
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Lol yeah, if I had to draw all those flowers I wouldn't want to draw anymore either XD Yep! With practice we'll get better
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I like your art style and the flowers look so pretty!
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ahhh you finished it!!! the only really OFF thing i see is that maybe Jun's hand's are a touch small? but that just might be how they look to me or something. but other than that, it looks really nice!~
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Yup!! x] Ahh, maybe? XD I used my own hands to model, but maybe I focused too much on the shape rather than the size xD Thank you!
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I use my hands as a model too, but my hands are like. really small so my hands always end up small hehe. but yeah. it's not too bad, in any case!
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Ahaha xD My hands are pretty big since I'm tall. Yeah I hope it's not noticeable! I tried to measure it by her face and I think it's approximately proportionate?
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my hands aren't even proportionate to me, okay. yeah, it's not too noticeable!
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Hahah! I have friends like that! I have one who looks pretty normal, but if you notice her feet, they're really really tiny! xD I don't think I have anything unproportionate, except my friends comment that I have small ears?
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my feet are really small too. still in kids sizes. heheh
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Ohdamn! O: That's really small!
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yeah kind of heheh
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