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Mello walked out.Flushed.breathing heavy.looking at all the kids. Was this happening to them? He thought. Did they get what L called the "special treatment"? He walked Slowly and dazed. His Mind was cluttered,confused. He kept on walking and found a tree and collapsed on the pile of leaves next to it and closed his eyes. I don't understand. He lay there for a few seconds not wanting to move.But then He smelled something. He sniffed at the air. Smoke. wait SMOKE! He shot up looking around. none of the other kids were alarmed.He looked to the side of him.Behind the tree was his best friend.Matt.And in his hand was a Cigarette. His eyes widened. "What the hell Matt!!?" Matt jumped at the sound of the boys voice and instantly put it out. He looked up at mello. And mello struck him fast and hard across the cheek. "What in bloody hell are you doing!?" Matt rubbed his cheek and gave his friend a smile. "smoking.What does it look like?" Mello was not amused with this. Why in gods name would Matt be doing something so stupid? Mello continued to scold his friend. "What If roger caught you!?" "I've been doing if for weeks!No one has caught me" Matt studied mellos face.which stilled looked flushed and dazed. "What happened to you?"Matt asked. Mello Flushed more at this. "u-umm....well...uh." Mello stuttered.He didn't know If he should tell him about it or not.What if Matt would think something bad about mello after he told him.But after all This was his best friend.And what if it was happening to Matt. Matt Stared at Mello waiting for an answer and when Mello didn't answer he asked again."Well What happened?" Mello Looked at the ground and then up at Matt again. He wanted to tell him. "Umm....I don't know how to explain it Matt" Matt scuffed at this. "Yeah whatever mel.You just dont wanna tell me" He really didn't know how to explain what L had been doing. So he came up with a plan. "How about I show you?" Matt smiled. "Alright.But if you got the shit beaten outta ya I don't want you to show me." Mello shook his head letting Matt know that this is not what had happened. "But you cant tell roger. or anyone else for that madder" "as long as you don't tell anyone about me smoking" "I wont but that's still nasty Matt" The boys shook hands together in agreement and made there way inside.************************
Walking down the hall to mello's bedroom mello was a little worried.what if roger finds us? what if Matt gets mad? He looks at Matt.Who was looking at his feet. "Mello?" Matt asked making Mello jump a little. "y-yes?" Matt placed his goggles on top of his head. "Is this gonna take very long cuz I wanna finish GTA Before dinner." He punched the red head in the arm. "Shut up Matt!!! You'll get to finish your stupid game!" He rolled his eyes at the boy and walked to his room.locking his door. "Why are you locking your door?"Matt asked leaning against the wall. "I just am OK!? Now...ummm. get on the bed" Matt did as mello told him to do. Mello was very nervous.And he didn't know what he was going to actually do to Matt. or how far he could get without Matt punching him in the face.He went to sit on the bed next to the redhead who you could tell was waiting impatiently.Mello thinks of what L first did to him. He wanted to copy L as much as possible to show Matt what he did. So thinking of what L Had done he pinned matt to the bed. The red heads eyes widened. But he kept quiet. Mello quickly undid Matt's pants and pulled them along with his boxers to his knees. Matt was fully flushed and really confused. Mello grabbed Matt's member and started massaging it up and down nervously."a-ahh Mell....what a-are yo-" Matt cut himself off with a Muffled moan. Mello Lowered his head down and licked the tip,making Matt grabbed a tight hold onto Mello's hair. Mello started licking and sucking at the tip of Matts member as L had did to his . "AHHH!! m-mello..." Matt groaned "There's a very bad feeling in my stomach!!" Mello remember that same feeling that he had had earlier and what L did when Mello had told him about that feeling. Mello took Matt fully into his mouth. Bobbing his head up and down. Matt couldn't stand it anymore He had to let this feeling go.so relaxing he came write in mello's mouth. Mello wanted to swallow. He liked the way Matt tasted. But he needed to do as L did. fuck L!!! a voice in his head told him. FUCK L!! FORGET HIM!! He thought for a second about it.But matt seemed to be getting restless so Mello did as the voice told him. He swallowed. And moaned while he did it. The white warm substance slid down his throat. It was bitter. not as sweet as his chocolate,but,in some way it was better. He looked up at the panting red head and smiled at him. Matt's eyes widen to a point were mello could not believe they could get much bigger. "And L.....did all of this to you!?" Mello sat up looking to the side and bit his lip. "y-yeah" Mello suddenly felt warm arms wrap around him and a kiss on his cheek. Matt smiled. "I was wondering what took you so long" Mello raised an eyebrow. "What do you mean by that!?"
TBC?
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Comments: 70
XFenikkusu [2011-03-11 02:03:29 +0000 UTC]
D:!, poor mello, but damn you L, but, he make Matt x Mello born! xD
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MATTIKINS52 [2011-03-08 03:49:14 +0000 UTC]
PedoL:snathcing up your orphans and violating their personal spaces
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PrinceZ3 In reply to MATTIKINS52 [2011-05-03 02:01:12 +0000 UTC]
My favorite comment so far ^
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MATTIKINS52 In reply to PrinceZ3 [2011-05-03 03:09:50 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you my good m'am ^_^
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PrinceZ3 In reply to MATTIKINS52 [2011-05-06 08:04:35 +0000 UTC]
Hahah actually that would be sir but no worries.
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MATTIKINS52 In reply to PrinceZ3 [2011-05-06 21:39:59 +0000 UTC]
The picture threw me off, I glanced for a quick second and saw pink and immediately typed m'am, as you can see... I corrected my self right away I'M REALLY SORRY THOUGH!!!!!
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MATTIKINS52 In reply to MATTIKINS52 [2011-05-03 03:18:01 +0000 UTC]
0.0 SIR, I MEANT SIR GAH!!! sorry
*damn me for being so stupid* I'M SORRY!!!!!!! SORRY SORRY SORRY...
yes emoticon I know... I know...
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jaspergal7 [2010-10-15 21:00:13 +0000 UTC]
i sat here for ten minutes just trying to find what to write.oh right...WTF L!what the hell was that!!!????I still liked it tho,I was slightly afraid.
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rachaelkaye23 [2010-08-17 06:06:15 +0000 UTC]
it was good, but i personally think L ould have been left out o it.
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miss-sama-sama [2010-05-30 14:35:11 +0000 UTC]
I'mm... so... happy.. gaah I still haven't blinked.. yay....
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yaoi-chick95 [2010-05-30 12:52:34 +0000 UTC]
this is the GREATEST story of matt and mello ever!!!
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rhianne-dostya97 [2009-10-24 05:00:33 +0000 UTC]
My eyes, THEY BURN!! I only blinked like five times while reading this! Yeah, not quite what I was expecting when I looked up MelloxMatt
...
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nudgevanillacl [2009-10-10 22:25:31 +0000 UTC]
yeh mello... thaats y u did it >_>
tehe luv it
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PrinceZ3 In reply to ToraixOfTheStorms [2009-06-01 04:29:29 +0000 UTC]
[link] Ye-ep! ^o^ THANK YOU!
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ToraixOfTheStorms In reply to PrinceZ3 [2009-06-02 00:50:28 +0000 UTC]
O.O!! nosebleed...
in the last reply art=fanfic
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KihomiLawliet [2009-04-23 18:01:56 +0000 UTC]
CUTE!!! How old are they supposed to be anyway??
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PrinceZ3 In reply to KihomiLawliet [2009-04-24 04:20:47 +0000 UTC]
Ermm...god...Well there supposed to be in Wammy's so like what are they 14?
Sorry I have not watched death note in forever XD
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KateSkirmish [2009-03-21 19:56:40 +0000 UTC]
okay i know its been like forever since you wrote this, but ill leave you a real comment anyway...
your story is pretty good (and this first part had a cute ending). now im kinda curious what the ending was before you changed it. o.o i really like how you wrote matts character, and i also like how mello doesnt want him to smoke. ^_^ there are only two things that i noticed that made the story feel kind of off:
1. not really sure when this was set. were they kids? L is still around and theyre at the orphanage, but a quick authors note would clear that up.
2. punctuation improvements would help the flow of your story, and they would better convey timing.
but yeah, cool. im off to read the next part now!!!!
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PrinceZ3 In reply to KateSkirmish [2009-03-23 07:46:30 +0000 UTC]
Alright I'll make A authors note about it XD. And yes It is set when they are kids in the orphanage...I like it better because..ya know...kinda hard to write a fanfiction about Matt and Mello doing things like this when there dead:/ Even though I have seen it happen O.o
My punctuation SUCKS DUCKS...and so does My spelling...I really suck at both...T_T I try but mehh...Thats why I have people like you who are like "IMPROVEMENTS" And im like...sweet.. I cant really rember what it was before...I think it was like something were mello just ran out of the room XD But I tried to forget about it because i HATE the first ending I did...
Thanx,Z
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hell-of-the-darkness [2009-03-13 12:17:00 +0000 UTC]
-sweatdrop-
God, Mello has a dirty way of telling people about things.
I hope he never tries to explain to me how he got it from behind ><
Ouch.
XD
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PrinceZ3 In reply to hell-of-the-darkness [2009-03-13 21:33:30 +0000 UTC]
XD LOL! thanx for the comment
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melia161 [2009-03-02 16:38:17 +0000 UTC]
BRILLIANT and i wud definately read the next one if u do
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PrinceZ3 In reply to melia161 [2009-03-03 05:40:28 +0000 UTC]
OMG REALLY 8D!? O__O I have been SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Busy and dead that Im like "DX" and I cant..
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PrinceZ3 In reply to cakoir [2008-10-27 13:09:47 +0000 UTC]
Really? Wow......Thank you....I havent been able to work on writting very much. you dont know what hell my scheadual is -_- But ill get working on it...soon..>.>
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cakoir In reply to PrinceZ3 [2008-10-28 02:12:04 +0000 UTC]
dun worry. take your time! just don't let stress get ya.
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Ryuzaki777 [2008-08-12 05:15:13 +0000 UTC]
It was pretty good, and I would read it if you made another chapter.
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Ryuzaki777 In reply to PrinceZ3 [2008-08-12 23:22:43 +0000 UTC]
You don't have to only if you feel like it, but I will read it if you make another one. : )
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PrinceZ3 In reply to Ryuzaki777 [2008-08-13 05:20:32 +0000 UTC]
I will make another one...like...sometime or another. *lazy*
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Ryuzaki777 In reply to PrinceZ3 [2008-08-21 05:33:49 +0000 UTC]
It's alright, lol. I have a few ideas for some fan-fiction, but when I'm out of school, I can't get myself to write. ^_^
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PrinceZ3 In reply to Ryuzaki777 [2008-08-21 13:30:29 +0000 UTC]
Lol well I have like NOOOO ideas...so if you like wanna share some with me >.< XD that be cool.
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Ryuzaki777 In reply to PrinceZ3 [2008-08-21 21:29:51 +0000 UTC]
One that I don't care so much to do, that I think that someone else would have better ideas for would be a wammy's picnic or something like that. A few of my ideas, I just randomly thought of a theme. This is one of them, it's completely from scratch and I don't mind if you want to be creative(devious)and think of some ideas for it and take it over. I don't need any credit though, it's just an idea.
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PrinceZ3 In reply to Ryuzaki777 [2008-08-23 05:19:05 +0000 UTC]
^___^ thankies... I'll probly turn it into random crack....or maby a yaoi O.O
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Ryuzaki777 In reply to PrinceZ3 [2008-08-23 15:27:43 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! Lol, that will be something I'll wait for. xD
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Blondie-Love [2008-08-04 22:07:57 +0000 UTC]
lol, so did L like, rape mello or something?!?!?
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