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Published: 2013-06-24 23:58:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 360; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description One more thing
I can handle that!  
I can help you!
One more thing
Added to the list
Added to the burdens
One more thing
Gleefully giving
Keeping nothing
One more thing
The stack gets higher
The weight gets heavier
One more thing
One more thing
Always just one more....
Until you stumble
Your grip shatters
Dropping your load
Upon the path before you
One more thing
Was one thing too many
And in the rubble
All you can do
Is pick up the pieces
Of the things that truly matter
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Comments: 6

Thespurgin [2013-12-28 17:08:41 +0000 UTC]

Late though this comment may be... it is here.
Huh, Y'know I can't tell if that's directed to a listener, or at the speaker himself. Probably doesn't make much difference, but it seems weird.

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Colonel-Eviscerator [2013-06-25 00:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Juan Moore Ting, the multicultural man about town buried under assumed obligations. May he rest in peace.

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Proforce In reply to Colonel-Eviscerator [2013-06-25 00:08:42 +0000 UTC]

May he indeed. *sounds the gong*

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Shadow-the-Hedgehog8 [2013-06-24 23:59:55 +0000 UTC]

that is so true! great job!

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Proforce In reply to Shadow-the-Hedgehog8 [2013-06-25 00:04:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and thank you for the watch and the fave!

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Shadow-the-Hedgehog8 In reply to Proforce [2013-06-25 00:05:46 +0000 UTC]

any time
loved your latest poem!

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