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ProfoundDesolation — Always Watching
Published: 2004-07-08 20:25:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 273; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description A part of everything
Yet detached from it all
Seeing everyone else participate
With hollow, blank eyes
Wondering why my involvement
Seems so distant, so different
Maybe I don't care
Maybe it's not what I want
I eloquently announce my arrival
I realize what a good actor I am
Pretending, hiding behind my charade
They fall for it
I don't like it here
Not with all these people
I retreat to quiet corner
Enjoying my own company
As I watch
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Comments: 25

oblivious-devotion [2004-07-12 05:38:05 +0000 UTC]

this is good....but i really hope it isnt about our drama group

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to oblivious-devotion [2004-07-12 19:08:30 +0000 UTC]

no...not at all! this piece is kinda abstract about life in general...but no way, i feel the most comfortable and at peace with drama...and thanks!

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oblivious-devotion In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-07-13 04:54:34 +0000 UTC]

ok just makin sure...cuz you were sorta weird at tap thursday...:S i love you meg!

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to oblivious-devotion [2004-07-13 04:58:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks..i love you too!

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Discontented-Pixie [2004-07-09 22:38:02 +0000 UTC]

good job megs!!!

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to Discontented-Pixie [2004-07-09 22:43:39 +0000 UTC]

thankies

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Psyco-in-a-box [2004-07-09 16:40:44 +0000 UTC]

great work... are you going to be at the good neighbor days thing?

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-07-09 21:27:17 +0000 UTC]

i think i might...and thanks!

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-07-11 02:27:40 +0000 UTC]

no problem... if you did go I didnt see you

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-07-11 17:54:06 +0000 UTC]

ya well...i didnt go cuz i had to work that day...then when i got off work we went to utah...thats where i am now, actually

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-07-11 18:21:28 +0000 UTC]

cool, where do you work

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-07-11 22:51:14 +0000 UTC]

cains home furnishings....*rolls eyes*....

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-07-12 00:12:40 +0000 UTC]

oh ya
well ya never know, sometimes people get jobs at places other than the family owned store type of thing.
just because I am special

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-07-12 19:12:12 +0000 UTC]

lol...i didnt mean to be mean...i only said that cuz i dont like working there

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-07-13 19:19:34 +0000 UTC]

oh, no worries. if you dont like working there you should aply somewhere else and tell your parents you dont wanna work two jobs... but then again, money is money and not a lot of people wanna hire fifteen year olds

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-07-14 16:26:38 +0000 UTC]

so true....no one will hire under 16....so, do you have a job....and what have you been up to all summer?

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-07-14 17:58:07 +0000 UTC]

hows your summer?

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-07-17 22:09:10 +0000 UTC]

not bad...yours?

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-07-18 02:11:19 +0000 UTC]

not bad I suppose

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-07-14 17:45:39 +0000 UTC]

I had a bit of a job. just something I did with joel for a couple days.
not too much... my life is rather boring.

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the-beuks [2004-07-08 20:48:36 +0000 UTC]

I know exactly what you're talking about! You've captured the feeling very well.

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to the-beuks [2004-07-09 00:57:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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jerzchick16 [2004-07-08 20:43:52 +0000 UTC]

very real poem, very deep great job!

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to jerzchick16 [2004-07-09 01:00:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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jerzchick16 In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-07-09 01:30:01 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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