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ProfoundDesolation — Hoping for More
Published: 2004-03-06 17:58:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description She looks outside
Sees the world with new eyes
The beauty filled garden
Overwhelmes her
It's full of new life
New hope
Things she'd do anything for
She absorbes the calm serenity
Taking in the feelings of peace
Maybe it's not so bad
Maybe she should give it one more day
The horror of her life
Seems stalled in this moment of bliss
She has hope, she knows she can do it
She gets up, gets ready
She walks outside,
Ready for anything
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Comments: 5

DeadEndWorld [2004-03-07 00:00:58 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAY! I love this one! I like the idea of it, being all.. feeling shitty and stuff, and then realizing things aren't that bad.. lovely!!

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to DeadEndWorld [2004-03-07 00:02:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you! your comments make me feel great!!

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DeadEndWorld In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-03-07 17:10:44 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Psyco-in-a-box [2004-03-06 23:46:43 +0000 UTC]

not too shabby there megan. I like it, it has a nice feel to it... doesnt flow the best, but still quite good

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insomnia-mae [2004-03-06 18:09:06 +0000 UTC]

awesome meg!!

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