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ProfoundDesolation — Self-Dependency
Published: 2004-03-11 01:32:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 118; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description I scream out into the abyss
But only the birds will reply
The lonliness and frustration
That only I'll know

Wondering when it will improve
The feelings of helplessness
Overwhelm and pull me down
There are no solutions in sight

But I have to tell you
I don't need your help
I have to pull through
I have to be in control of my own life.
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Comments: 6

Psyco-in-a-box [2004-03-11 03:55:38 +0000 UTC]

to the point indeed. were you trying to PROOVE a point to someone though? or just a general...thing... I like it though, I got the point you were prooving I think...maybe I got the wrong point though... hmmmm...well I have two possible points:-p oh well. nice poem

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-03-11 14:54:03 +0000 UTC]

my poem is basically saying that i may need help but im not going to accept it because i have to pull myself out...even tho thats kinda self contradicting because i take depression medicine...LOL!! i dunno im just writing....what are your points?

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-03-11 23:25:26 +0000 UTC]

well, I know what you mean. at first I thought it was about the whole depression thing, but then I was thinking it was about the whole tutoring thing

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ProfoundDesolation In reply to Psyco-in-a-box [2004-03-12 00:21:07 +0000 UTC]

no, not at all

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Psyco-in-a-box In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-03-12 00:22:37 +0000 UTC]

ok, good :-P, I think thats stupid how your parents wouldnt let you. but its their choice I suppose

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jerzchick16 [2004-03-11 02:51:12 +0000 UTC]

good work, "short and sweet and to the point"!!

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