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Published: 2004-03-14 23:12:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 202; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 13
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She wanders alone,She has to appear fine.
She can't let them see her cry.
She desperately needs someone,
Someone to understand and love her,
Someone to care,
The scars cut into her body
are seen by all, but no concern
is issued for her
They'd prefer her gone,
She'd prefer herself gone, too.
She can't handle this life anymore,
The pain, the looks, the loneliness.
She has to get out.
She has to be free of this life
that only taunts and tortures her.
Her last moments...
She wrote a note to her mom,
Because she was the only one who cared.
Her last thoughts...
Filled with regrets for
The life she could have had.
Comments: 20
jademercenary [2004-03-19 01:17:15 +0000 UTC]
that's sad and even sadder that it could happen. beautifully written.
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DeadEndWorld [2004-03-16 00:36:29 +0000 UTC]
Whooa.. I really like this, it's really emotional. And I can kinda relate to it too. Good job!!! -clapclapclap-
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insomnia-mae [2004-03-15 06:17:03 +0000 UTC]
wow...megan...that's awesome....so sad! one of my new favorites (not on DA, in the world)
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ProfoundDesolation In reply to insomnia-mae [2004-03-16 02:34:04 +0000 UTC]
WOW THANK YOU TRESS!!!!
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Libbyluvswolves [2004-03-15 02:31:28 +0000 UTC]
I like this poem a lot. Reminds me of how I used to be. I like it a lot!!!!
~Libby
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ProfoundDesolation In reply to Libbyluvswolves [2004-03-15 02:32:56 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for the fave!
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Libbyluvswolves In reply to ProfoundDesolation [2004-03-15 02:37:23 +0000 UTC]
No problem!! It deserved it!!
~Libby
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Shakakuwolf [2004-03-15 02:05:08 +0000 UTC]
*hums* Suicide is intresting but I wanna know what this girl did to be so hated o.o;;;
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jerzchick16 [2004-03-15 01:40:38 +0000 UTC]
OMG this poem so describes a friend of my to a point. thats so weird. the only thing is that my friend is a guy!!! lol
i really like it!!! good job
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jerzchick16 In reply to jerzchick16 [2004-03-15 04:13:05 +0000 UTC]
i had to. it wouldnt be right if i liked the poem so much and DIDNT add it to my favs. lol
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ProfoundDesolation In reply to jerzchick16 [2004-03-15 02:09:59 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for putting this on your favorites!!!
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Rogue5001 [2004-03-15 00:45:33 +0000 UTC]
o.o Beautiful.
I mean.. wow.
Speaks to a part of my past I'd rather forget
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ProfoundDesolation In reply to Rogue5001 [2004-03-15 02:13:32 +0000 UTC]
thanks! i know...i know exactly how you feel...me too, thanks for sharing
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