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Published: 2004-06-18 03:09:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 13
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Description Deny it, and it will enervate
Forget it, and it will fade away
Move it , and it will break
Look past it, and be blinded by gray
walk away, and be filled with hate
without it, who's to say?
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Comments: 10

forgetthedreampoet [2009-03-12 21:07:57 +0000 UTC]

I really like this. It is one of those poems when you read it you just get this warm feeling inside of you. I don't get that feeling very much, so you know you did something good. Fantastisk dikt!

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visceraldagger [2004-08-21 20:56:29 +0000 UTC]

I haven't gotten to read all of your works...but this one I *needed* to say something about.I really feel this...it's so simple but it has impact.Deep impact to the ones that know.

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program In reply to visceraldagger [2004-08-21 21:22:41 +0000 UTC]

hey thank you very much, i was originally going to write the poem/song in Norwegian, but then no one would understand it.I am exceptionnaly grateful for your wonderful comment on Vakker because it was not suppose to be about love, but more about a girl that i use to date.seeing how 90% of my gallery are Songs and Poems about violence,muder,murderers,death,destructi on,and what have you, this one poem/song seems to have gooten quite alot of attention.but that's not the point...the point is i am very happy and grateful for your comment but more grateful that you understood the message, you're a very smart girl.THANK YOU!!!!!

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visceraldagger In reply to program [2004-08-22 02:05:41 +0000 UTC]

I love dark poetry,it's the only kind I truely feel.I'm going to look at some of your past works,but I couldn't leave this one without a thought.So you know Norwegian?I'm...so curious to see what it would have looked like under the veil of a different language.

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blackfishnets [2004-06-27 04:05:27 +0000 UTC]

ooo nice job :]

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program In reply to blackfishnets [2004-06-27 19:37:37 +0000 UTC]

thanx, i'm glad you like my shit

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blackfishnets In reply to program [2004-06-27 20:43:01 +0000 UTC]

^.^

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TheEllenThingg [2004-06-18 03:21:19 +0000 UTC]

simple...but powerful....i really like it

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program In reply to TheEllenThingg [2004-06-18 03:30:35 +0000 UTC]

wow!!!! thank you. it was't suppose to be what it became....it was suppose to be about this girl....but the song turned into a poem and became this.

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TheEllenThingg In reply to program [2004-06-18 15:16:56 +0000 UTC]

really? well what it became was very good...lol

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