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Published: 2005-01-01 01:14:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 60; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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from the ashes of this failed dream...i rise,alone with my new beginning...
blood that runs black...
with hatred for you...
i see through...all of your lies...
your acidic tears...burn holes through my heart...
i despise, all the things you said...
you never really cared...
i'll never care...
again......
I DESPISE YOU!!!
WITH GREAT HATRED!!!
I DESPISE YOU!!!
HOW COULD YOU LIE??!?!?!?!?!
THROUGH THOSE BEAUTIFUL FUCKING EYES!!!!!
WHY??!?!?
THE THINGS YOU SAID!!!!
THE THINGS I FELT!!!!
FUCK YOU!!!
FUCK YOU AND ROT IN YOUR LIES!!!!
YOU HAVE NO FUCKING HEART!!!!
EATEN AWAY BY THE MAGGOTS OF YOU FAULTS!!!!!
I...FUCKING...HATE YOU!!!
there is not enough bullets...
to cure this...
there is not enough hatred to do it...
for past memories...
of a lost friend...
can't bear to bring it all to an end...
BUT WHY I SHOULD I REMAIN?!?!??!?!
I KILL ALL MY THOUGHTS OF YOU!!!
NO MORE!!!!
NOTHING!!!!
NO MORE!!!!
ANYTHING!!!
JUST A BLEAK WASTELAND OF MURDERED MEMORIES!!!!
JUST BLEAK WASTELAND OF MURDERED EMOTIONS!!!!
JUST A BLEAK GODDAMN WASTELAND OF THIS ENITITY!!!!
THAT IS ME!!!
NO HEART!!!
NO SOUL!!!
NO BODY!!!
JUST HATE MOTHERFUCKER!!!!!!!!
JUST PURE FUCKING HATRED!!!!!
I KILL IT ALL AWAY!!!!!
i kill you...
out of my mind....
i kill you...
away from my heart...
i kill you...
out of my life...
i kill...
myself.......
I KILL YOU!!!!
OUT OF THIS MIND!!!
I KILL YOU!!!
AWAY FROM THIS HEART!!!
I KILL YOU!!!
OUT OF THIS LIFE!!!
I KILL....
MYSELF!!!!
MALEVOLENT!!!!
I KILL...
MYSELF!!!!!
THIS IS THE END!!!
I KILL...
MYSELF!!!!
inside.....
Comments: 5
sweetlildevil [2005-01-02 14:08:28 +0000 UTC]
Ah..To much profanity. It takes away from the beauty of the poem. I love the words don't get me wrong..but don't put caps lock in a poem. It often offends readers, yes it shows anger but it just..ah..I haven't the word for it. Other than that great job. I feel the anger.
-Justin's Goddess
Aka
Donna
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program In reply to sweetlildevil [2005-01-03 02:58:31 +0000 UTC]
hey, thx for the advice though.
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Emotional-Emptiness [2005-01-01 02:05:26 +0000 UTC]
wow...just wow...no words can describe how much I like this.
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program In reply to Emotional-Emptiness [2005-01-01 03:43:56 +0000 UTC]
thx, i have finally achieved the poem i've always wanted to write. a poem whose words can make an individual reset to zero and just snap....THANK YOU UBER TIME!!!!!
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