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Published: 2004-10-01 01:37:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 40; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description superficially perfect
my life you infect...

with the barrel
to my temple...

save your apologies and sorrow
for the new tomorrow...

time lasts forever
i was only so clever...

a cold that infiltrates
we are so fake...

your lips move
i am unfinished
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Comments: 7

purefuckinghatred [2004-10-01 21:48:42 +0000 UTC]

thats really good work buddy *thumbs up*

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Emotional-Emptiness [2004-10-01 14:54:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I really like this, Erik..nice job

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RedheadedBrunette [2004-10-01 01:52:37 +0000 UTC]

very cool


*side step*

*wave*

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program In reply to RedheadedBrunette [2004-10-01 01:57:57 +0000 UTC]

thanx...i really appreciate it

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RedheadedBrunette In reply to program [2004-10-01 02:00:03 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome I like the way you write.... it is intriquing in itself to say it can stand up on it's own with out explaination that is an excellant way to write....


*puts the shotgun away for another day*

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program In reply to RedheadedBrunette [2004-10-01 02:04:54 +0000 UTC]

omg.....you have made me feel so much better, cuz sometimes i'll look back at what i wriet and i don't think it will make sense to anyone who reads it....especially these Free Verse, Free style poems i'm doing now

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RedheadedBrunette In reply to program [2004-10-01 02:17:15 +0000 UTC]

I am glad... I feel that way sometimes... like nobody will get me or what I am wanting to express... it is expected of an artist almost... to want others to understand... then read what you wrote and say how can anyone else understand this then lo and behold someone just does.....



*smile*

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