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Published: 2009-03-12 02:41:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description glass hearts
spun out of cotton-candy
(liquid fire)
crystallized to form
a half-smile,
a reformed thought
(begin again
on a new ending)
frail little tendrils
of a love once strong
ascend to duel
with the fear of fate.
(glass hearts fight
and break)
your heart is not glass,
not bubbled sea diamonds
caressing the sand.
it is a kevlar crane:
unbreakable,
but unable to take flight.
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Comments: 11

gliitchlord [2009-03-19 03:45:14 +0000 UTC]

Outstanding imagery and word choice.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to gliitchlord [2009-03-19 04:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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RalfMaximus [2009-03-15 12:03:05 +0000 UTC]

+5 use of "Kevlar" in a poem.

Made me smile beeg.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to RalfMaximus [2009-03-16 03:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Yey kevlar!

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LtCloud9 [2009-03-12 03:00:27 +0000 UTC]

This is a pretty poem but it has a sadness to it!
I like the imagery of the first few lines!

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to LtCloud9 [2009-03-16 04:30:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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TAFKKKMlove1 [2009-03-12 02:44:24 +0000 UTC]

It made me feel sad. ):

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to TAFKKKMlove1 [2009-03-12 02:45:37 +0000 UTC]

At least it made you feel.

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TAFKKKMlove1 In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-03-12 02:47:05 +0000 UTC]

That is true. Hm.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to TAFKKKMlove1 [2009-03-12 02:47:55 +0000 UTC]

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TAFKKKMlove1 In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-03-12 02:51:56 +0000 UTC]

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