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Prosaic-Scriptor — Explosion
Published: 2009-01-27 06:15:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 213; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 6
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Description burst of flavor in my mouth
your tender shell speaks of mint leaves
and icy cold
a lingering memory of the
refrigerator where I left you

(colder tastes better)

i'll bite you in half
straight to your tender middle
you're the only one for me
forever i'll be
your diet coke, baby,
if you'll be my mento

(bubbles in my day
the fizz in my life

let's explode together

mmm)
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Comments: 9

sibilantesses [2009-01-31 21:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I like it. I want Junior Mints now. Mmm.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to sibilantesses [2009-02-01 19:56:04 +0000 UTC]

Om nom nom...

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Blueskye27 [2009-01-29 14:28:19 +0000 UTC]

Very cool double meanings here. I like it.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-01-30 04:28:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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HoldingBackTears [2009-01-27 22:50:22 +0000 UTC]

This was SOOOO cute! :'D

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to HoldingBackTears [2009-01-28 02:38:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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HoldingBackTears In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-01-29 02:26:27 +0000 UTC]

:3

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LtCloud9 [2009-01-27 06:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Cool poem! I love the imagery, especially of the first stanza-it reminds me of something refreshing like gum/mints.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to LtCloud9 [2009-01-28 02:38:25 +0000 UTC]

Mentooooos!

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