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Prosaic-Scriptor — Fallin' Angel
Published: 2009-03-10 02:52:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 384; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description I fell
        d
         o
           w
             n
                    till I reached the stars.
                 So I whispered to the heavens
                 that they needed polishing but
                god doesn't listen to the likes of me.
           (                           no                                     )
                      god doesn't listen to me.

Papa told me he saved a spot
   but Daddy, I looked,
and someone must have taken it.
'cause all the spots are filled in Heaven.
     (             and   I'm alone
           i'm alone.  )

                    Sissy's
                                 g
                                      o
                                          n
                                              e
                                                         a
                                                              w
                                                                       a
                                                                               y
                            and mama said she'd beat me
                              if I sang the angel's songs.
                           no I can't sing the angel's songs.

I just wanna
                                                                  s
                                                                w
                                                               i
                                                            n
                                                          g
                                            l
                                       o
                                  w
(
   sweet chariot
                             )

but heaven's only open for the
good girls
    the good girls!
               and no one's comin' for to carry me home.

                              (no)
                                             
    I
                                                         
   ain't
                             n
                               e
                                 v
                                   e
                                     r
                                                   
                                                 goin'
     
                     h                o                 m               e


                                                 
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Comments: 17

starisis9 [2011-08-29 21:41:47 +0000 UTC]

So deep and beautiful well done.

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tenko72 [2009-03-31 02:07:32 +0000 UTC]

I like how this leads my eyes. I feel sorry for that girl. :C

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to tenko72 [2009-04-15 03:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you thought so.

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tenko72 In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-04-17 18:04:13 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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sibilantesses [2009-03-27 17:42:35 +0000 UTC]

I love this, but it's incredibly sad. I don't really have words to tell you why or how, but I feel genuinely connected to this little Southern dead girl. It's heart-wrenching.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to sibilantesses [2009-03-29 18:40:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you could feel that, I tried to convey it.

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EatingMyOwnFears [2009-03-11 04:55:29 +0000 UTC]

GReat mental imagery!

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to EatingMyOwnFears [2009-03-12 01:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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EatingMyOwnFears In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-03-12 06:33:42 +0000 UTC]

you are most welcome!!

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to EatingMyOwnFears [2009-03-16 04:33:53 +0000 UTC]

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EatingMyOwnFears In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-03-17 03:00:04 +0000 UTC]

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Liduen-Kvaedhi [2009-03-10 02:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Love the way you organized your words.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to Liduen-Kvaedhi [2009-03-10 02:55:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It took a lot of hits to the space bars. *holds up sore thumb*

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Liduen-Kvaedhi In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-03-10 02:57:33 +0000 UTC]

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Blacksnovampire [2009-03-10 02:53:38 +0000 UTC]

so awsome! x3

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to Blacksnovampire [2009-03-10 02:54:34 +0000 UTC]

You think? Thank you!

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Blacksnovampire In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-03-10 23:17:48 +0000 UTC]

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