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Prosaic-Scriptor — Nostalgia
Published: 2009-04-01 04:12:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description I like the taste of chlorinated water
on my new blue jeans,
distressing it thread by thread till
it's soft and nappy like your laugh
in the morning.

Sometimes I stroke the mango ocean
just to hear the water's salt,
hissing by in a puckering,
prickling wave of seas
that have seen too many
artificial tears,

and have grazed the sea bottom with
a sigh that sees my heart's murmur,
pattering along the sidewalk
sanded clean of silky summers;
the ones the sun makes fresh
from the dreams of a preteen waiting,
hoping for a love that will initiate her heart
into a suicidal pattern that
goes on like pi.

I want to see that twinge of pain
in your eyes when the water pours from
them like the drinking fountains I
used to break,
with wads of chewing gum
and sticks, so they'd
spout on forever,
sparkling like neon rays of my
dying smile;
rough but not cheap,
yellow but not gold.
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Comments: 2

RalfMaximus [2009-04-03 13:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. "Mango Ocean" sounds like a new Snapple flavor, and gave me pause. But once I figured out what you were up to, it was a fun li'l romp.

It's rare to find synesthesia in literature nowadays, so +5 for that.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to RalfMaximus [2009-04-15 03:14:12 +0000 UTC]

Ooh.... A new Snapple flavor. Yum.

Thanks!

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