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Published: 2009-06-28 04:15:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 218; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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the bridge of refracted light breachesthe lens of an iris -
purple petals breathe in
the light of life;
orange on purple,
warm on the mellow.
would a Bee alight on the
velvet lips of night?
to dare and gaze upon
the moon's dim reflection?
--- or mayhap close those rosy lips and
I will clothe myself in that scent
- let me sup upon nectar golden
till I drown on the river
bittersweet---
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Oh, this is dripping with imagery.
Has a bit of an older feel to it, which is lovely.
I love
would a Bee alight on the
velvet lips of night?
I will clothe myself in that scent
& the idea of drowning in a river of nectar.
Great piece.
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And I almost forgot the wonderful play on words with 'close those rosy lips', as well as a lot of agreeable sounds (purple petals, light life, close those rosy clothe, myself scent, sup upon).
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Awesome job!
I love the imagery, it has a spring feel to it!
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