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Published: 2009-04-08 03:46:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 6
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Description Strumpets sing
vaingloriously
of poets dead
notoriously
bereft of things
laboriously

won.

Words drop down
meritoriously
writing shackled
censoriously
men bow down
uxoriously

to Her.

(she smiled quite
inglorious(ly),
she took it
quite
victorious(ly))
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Comments: 8

sibilantesses [2009-04-12 19:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, wordplay is fun. This is very nice.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to sibilantesses [2009-04-15 03:08:52 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you!

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gliitchlord [2009-04-09 19:31:39 +0000 UTC]



Outstanding rhymes.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to gliitchlord [2009-04-15 03:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Blueskye27 [2009-04-09 13:33:01 +0000 UTC]

I like your use of language and rhyme in this piece. It enhances the sense of vaingloriousness - nice!

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-04-15 03:10:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, Cindy!

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LtCloud9 [2009-04-08 03:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem!
It is different but I think it works!

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to LtCloud9 [2009-04-09 04:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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