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Prosaic-Scriptor — Star-crossed
Published: 2009-03-26 03:52:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 302; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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Description I fell in love with Death today,
with his bone white teeth
and his plague riddled eyes,
I saw him and ached for his
tarnished heart.

He looked in my eyes with his
wild gaze, and I felt love like I never had.
But he is older than feeling,
and I am newborn as the fall,
seeping silently from the shadowed
air through currents sweet and fragile.
But still he kissed me... how he kissed me.
I tasted wars, and death, and newborn
death rattles, hoarse in the silence
of a dying day,
through lips gray as tattered hope.

Tears fluttered down like summer song,
and he did not say anything, but I knew it:
I am the dying leaf on the tree,
but he is the bird that sings on.
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Comments: 14

TerraGabriella [2009-04-03 03:25:14 +0000 UTC]

I like it!

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to TerraGabriella [2009-04-15 03:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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EatingMyOwnFears [2009-03-28 01:26:44 +0000 UTC]

incredible!

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to EatingMyOwnFears [2009-03-29 18:40:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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EatingMyOwnFears In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-03-30 02:34:07 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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cold-hearted-world [2009-03-28 00:25:57 +0000 UTC]

this gave me chills...
especially the last two lines.
kinda like death will always be.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to cold-hearted-world [2009-03-29 18:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Really? Thanks so much.

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cold-hearted-world In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-04-01 01:52:31 +0000 UTC]

youre very welcome.

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LtCloud9 [2009-03-26 18:36:34 +0000 UTC]

I like the dark element of death in this piece and how you put romance into it! Awesome job!

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to LtCloud9 [2009-03-29 18:41:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much.

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RalfMaximus [2009-03-26 07:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Death. He's a seductive bastard.

But don't expect him to settle down. He's always seein somebody...

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to RalfMaximus [2009-03-29 18:41:45 +0000 UTC]

I know, I know. I keep telling myself that.

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gliitchlord [2009-03-26 04:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic perspective.

And the term "star-crossed" is one of my favorites.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to gliitchlord [2009-03-29 18:42:10 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it's one of mine, too. Thank you!

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