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Published: 2009-03-11 02:42:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 126; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description i. crackle of fear
dawn breaks the night
wind hissing past

ii. groan of the morrow
birds shriek through glass
fallen eve

iii. apple tinctured sun
warbles in the clouds
cyanide sky bleeds
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Comments: 6

sibilantesses [2009-03-27 17:39:37 +0000 UTC]

I love the phrase "apple tinctured". It just sounds so... rustic. Hahaha.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to sibilantesses [2009-03-29 18:40:51 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thanks!

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cold-hearted-world [2009-03-11 02:50:05 +0000 UTC]

i like that line
"cyanide sky bleeds"
it paints an interesting picture for me,
no matter the context

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to cold-hearted-world [2009-03-11 02:51:10 +0000 UTC]

It is a nice line, isn't it. ^^ Thank you.

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cold-hearted-world In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-03-11 02:52:38 +0000 UTC]

it is,
very much so.
and your welcome.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to cold-hearted-world [2009-03-11 03:13:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you again! ^^

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