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Description
beige prismsglinting in the drowning
sun,
slipping past
the horizon line
of frothy pink
and saffron foam;
salmon-tinctured clouds
whisper on
through the night.
(do they wait
for the fickle Moon?)
they bide their time
on the crescent
of a sand dune,
in your dream,
in my hope,
in the wispy
strains of a sea chanty
we've all forgotten
the words
to.
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Comments: 9
AsteriaSinclair [2009-04-10 01:04:43 +0000 UTC]
The imagery is beautiful, yes, especially the first stanza.
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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to AsteriaSinclair [2009-04-15 03:09:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much.
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Blueskye27 [2009-04-09 13:01:43 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful description, Kate. Did you mean the last word to be to or too?
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