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Prosaic-Scriptor — in passing
Published: 2009-04-09 04:16:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description beige prisms
glinting in the drowning
sun,
slipping past
the horizon line
of frothy pink
and saffron foam;

salmon-tinctured clouds
whisper on
through the night.
(do they wait
for the fickle Moon?)
they bide their time
on the crescent
of a sand dune,

in your dream,
in my hope,
in the wispy
strains of a sea chanty
we've all forgotten
the words
to.
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Comments: 9

EatingMyOwnFears [2009-04-11 18:12:22 +0000 UTC]

YAY FOR BEACHES!!

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to EatingMyOwnFears [2009-04-15 03:08:57 +0000 UTC]

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EatingMyOwnFears In reply to Prosaic-Scriptor [2009-04-15 05:22:22 +0000 UTC]

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AsteriaSinclair [2009-04-10 01:04:43 +0000 UTC]

The imagery is beautiful, yes, especially the first stanza.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to AsteriaSinclair [2009-04-15 03:09:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much.

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Blueskye27 [2009-04-09 13:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Oops, nevermind - I misread it.

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-04-15 03:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Lol.

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Blueskye27 [2009-04-09 13:01:43 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful description, Kate. Did you mean the last word to be to or too?

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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-04-15 03:10:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much, Cindy.

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