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frayed fringe of denim eyes-blink twice and I will be gone-
border them with twicebacktacked
lashes
(let them speak,
for they leak sweet tears)
had I ached for that
acrimonious smile,
the bitter, two edged blades
that are your lips--?
would I--?
and yet tears are no substitute
for well oiled steel,
and your eyes are no
match for a soul--.
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Comments: 7
I very much like this one. The last stanza is magic.
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Thanks, glad you liked it.
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Makes me think of this: [link]
The word 'acrimonious' reminds me of lacrimal glands (tear glands), so that ties in quite well.
I also like the play of 'two hard edged blades that are your lips'.
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I can see the ties, yes.
Thanks bunches, as always! You're always commenting, and it makes my day. ^_^
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hogawd I was not expecting that.
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