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Published: 2009-03-20 02:41:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 233; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 9
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memories slip us byas we wait in the stream of time,
the slick river oasis
that washes clean the
scent of suffering
and tragedy's touch:
we wait for the moon's sigh.
breath of air
puffs the clouds away
the stars sneeze and
ethereal, far away dust
disperses, wafting past
galaxies of pain,
a universe of regret:
the sun cries in the earth.
lemon drop scurries past
pure puffs of cotton cloud
alighting on the branch
of a turgid lightning bolt,
caught in the web of a storm
about to strike:
it smells of thunder.
drops hiss by
and slap the frozen ground,
crushing the stone in a
death-grip,
hugging tight and
waiting for their star
to take them back to
her warm embrace:
there is hope.
life slips by
on a bed of swollen tears,
and a star hits your lips:
it brings us home.
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Comments: 5
MistressWinter [2009-03-20 05:05:35 +0000 UTC]
I love the word ethereal sooo much c:
The way you used your choice words was so good. I mean, really good. The imagery was stunning methinks
The ending part really did it for me though It was just perfect :]
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Prosaic-Scriptor In reply to MistressWinter [2009-03-26 03:54:35 +0000 UTC]
Yes? Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it...
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