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Published: 2010-05-02 16:25:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 430; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 8
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Finished piece of the character Wyvern on the rooftop in her home city!OC property of Merides.
Art by me
5.0 pencils, prismacolor black and color inks and watercolor sky.
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Comments: 24
serialkid [2010-05-03 13:49:29 +0000 UTC]
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Hi Proto!!!
I believe that you have A LOT of potential, so... I'm going to be "hard". Excuse my english, if I make mistakes ^_^.
The drawing is so expressive (that's a part of the "art" that you have under control!!), and I really love the "fan" perspective of the background!!! But there are a few little issues with anatomiy. Even i a cartoonish artwork like these one, there are some "rules" that will improve the quility of the final result. Take care with the construction of the shoulders and hips, 'cos a "broken" appearence makes the figure seem with funny bone shapes.
About the color, next time try a most obvious source for the light!! That will help you to define better the shapes and volumes!
Please, understand this as a fair critic!! I don't want to upset you in anyway!! I really like the artwork, and I think that you can improve your skills!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Prototype66 In reply to serialkid [2010-05-03 16:52:29 +0000 UTC]
I would never be offended by someone helping me be a better artist, thank you for being honest and pointing out places I do need work. I agree completely after looking at it . Thank you very much my friend!
Cheers!~
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serialkid In reply to Prototype66 [2010-05-03 21:01:46 +0000 UTC]
^_^
I'll be very proud of helping in anything in my hand!!
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Prototype66 In reply to serialkid [2010-05-03 23:25:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you !! much appreciated!!
want to do a sketch card trade?
(sorry kinda random thought, they just pop out some times!) lol
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serialkid In reply to Prototype66 [2010-05-04 08:15:19 +0000 UTC]
hu... What's a "sketch card trade"? ^_^
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Prototype66 In reply to serialkid [2010-05-04 09:44:28 +0000 UTC]
Make a drawing the size of a sketch card (I think 2.5 X 3.5) I draw your request , you draw mine. Doesn't have to be a sketch card. can be whatever you like. If you ever want to do a trade let me know.
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serialkid In reply to Prototype66 [2010-05-04 15:56:28 +0000 UTC]
Sounds great!!
I want a PowerGirl!!
Your turn...!!! He he!!
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Prototype66 In reply to serialkid [2010-05-04 18:41:52 +0000 UTC]
you got it!
How about a Storm from x-men for me!
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serialkid In reply to Prototype66 [2010-05-04 18:47:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah!!! Do you like the Mohawk haircut?!
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Prototype66 In reply to serialkid [2010-05-04 18:50:56 +0000 UTC]
no the long flowing hair like this version
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Prototype66 In reply to Donkay6646 [2010-05-03 18:22:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much sir!!!
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Hyborian222 [2010-05-03 03:46:12 +0000 UTC]
Really cool!I like the way the background style goes with the character style
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Prototype66 In reply to Hyborian222 [2010-05-03 18:26:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you my man! appreciate it!
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KingsLamb [2010-05-03 01:58:23 +0000 UTC]
Hey there
It's been really neat to see the progress of this one, great work!
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Prototype66 In reply to KingsLamb [2010-05-03 03:09:28 +0000 UTC]
Hiya!
Thank you very much! Now I need a new Project!
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Prototype66 In reply to Merides [2010-05-02 22:32:32 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it! Cant wait top see what you did with Rex!
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Merides In reply to Prototype66 [2010-05-03 03:53:40 +0000 UTC]
Soon, my friend... soon!
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