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Proulxes — Camerado: Passionate Kisses of Parting (part 2)

Published: 2013-05-19 20:56:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1263; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
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Description His kiss was inexperienced, all teeth and great hooked nose getting in the way, and he pulled back almost immediately, face flushed, all but shoving Hermione away from him. “I--” he began, but she was breathless and impatient, and grabbed him by the collar of his dressing gown.

“Again,” she breathed, and stood on her toes to reach his mouth with hers. She tilted her head, angling her chin just so, reaching up to cup his face in her hands. His skin was warm and scratchy with stubble, and after a moment Severus’ hands came up hesitantly to cradle the back of her head. When Hermione opened her mouth, she felt his groan in her toes.

When they broke apart, Severus was panting, his fingers tangled in her hair. He bent his head until their brows were touching, and closed his eyes. Hermione let her hands fall from his cheeks, but only as far as his shoulders, which she clutched tightly, feeling dazed and unsteady.

Third in the 'Camerado' series of illustrations, from the superb story by MillieJoan.
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Comments: 10

LauraLF [2013-10-19 16:00:24 +0000 UTC]

I actually just reread the story yesterday.. beautiful artwork, it's just like I imagined it 

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Proulxes In reply to LauraLF [2013-10-20 12:04:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, LauraLF.  I love, love, love this story.  I think that the characterisations are absolutely superb, and the story is heart wrenching and beautifully told.  There are not many writers who can capture his bitter insecurities like MillieJoan can.  I just hope that she continues to post - it's been a long time! Pxx

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LauraLF In reply to Proulxes [2013-10-20 13:07:56 +0000 UTC]

I feel the same about the story! I think it's so so so beautiful and well written. hopefully she'll continue it soon, I miss it very much!


do you write fanfics? xxx

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Proulxes In reply to LauraLF [2013-10-20 18:28:23 +0000 UTC]

aaaahhh, yup!  You got me!  My stuff is mostly on The Petulant Poetess or Granger Enchanted.  How about you?  Pxx

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LauraLF In reply to Proulxes [2013-10-20 19:23:50 +0000 UTC]

would you link me? (in a note perhaps if you don't want it to be in public) 

I don't, I can't get myself to write something longer than a few pages xx

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Proulxes In reply to LauraLF [2013-10-21 08:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Okay - here's the address of my story page on TPP! No good at 'linking' I'm afraid....
www.thepetulantpoetess.com/vie…
Hope you enjoy them! The Redemption Charm is probably closest in mood to Camerado...!

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LauraLF In reply to Proulxes [2013-10-21 23:59:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the link, I am really excited about reading your stuff xx

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Proulxes In reply to LauraLF [2013-10-22 19:55:10 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome! Pxx

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MillieJoan [2013-05-22 16:15:31 +0000 UTC]

I love everything about this, especially their expressions and hair. So, so lovely!

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Proulxes In reply to MillieJoan [2013-06-02 17:41:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! I am so pleased you like it. Keep writing!! Pxx

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