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prushim — rear brain window
Published: 2008-01-23 00:42:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description I miss you when you're asleep
even though you're next to me
breathing

I imagine that you're dead
and that you're with me but not in body
-that makes your sleeping body a nice surprise
when my mind comes back to me

I miss you when you're at work
even though we're busy people
who earn money
I wish we could just lay around hugging each other
a few more hours a day

Sometimes it's very hard to leave you
to catch the bus
even though I'm fine once I'm on
I still loathe letting go of your hand

I hope in five years time I can still surprise myself
by remembering that you're alive,
next to me,
and I'm your wife.
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Comments: 3

Robsonnet [2008-02-20 12:51:58 +0000 UTC]

My kind of romantic musing. I love it.

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ScribbledNotes [2008-01-31 04:32:25 +0000 UTC]

Love it. Reminds me of the things my girl would say to me, surprising me, actual that she cares so deeply about me. Lovely.

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prushim In reply to ScribbledNotes [2008-02-04 01:06:53 +0000 UTC]

There are few things better than a nice surprise.
I'm glad you love it.

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