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Published: 2006-11-07 00:23:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 75651; Favourites: 548; Downloads: 58412
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Another vehicle of my private film project. I'm not satisfied with it at moment. I already collected some suggestions but i would apreciate to have some more.3D modeling and Design: ยฉ Patrick Schad
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Ah, I see. Well, I have to admit that it did seem in that manner. Of course you are forgiven, lol. I sometimes have that manner about me when I make comments.
On the contrary, your English is not as bad as you claim; I hear some speakers of the language who have a much worse grasp of their own tongue than you have of their written word...lol.
I look forward to seeing and saying more about your work myself
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so, it's a gun-for-hire kind of thing. Alright; now I can see a little more where you come from.
Forgive me for only noticing this now, but I've been scrutinizing your bird there and i have to say that you have some incredibly beautiful lines around your cockpit area... I also just noticed what seems to me to be hot carbon-scoring around a nozzle at the nose... (just remember that traditional powder-propellant bullets don't work in space... yada yada you've probably heard that before...)
Your intakes look untextured, so I'm sorry if these particular suggestions seem redundant. You definitely want your intakes VERY shiny, more so than the rest of the plane, unless you want to try to explain away the fact of particulate matter being jammed into your expensive and most likely delicate engine components (lol). The output areas should be heat-tempered and resistant material - so darker than the rest of the plane...
I'm also assuming that the circular looking object protruding from the top of your cockpit is the hatch, nice touch. Oh wait that could be your fuel port... dang now I've confused myself...lol.
Another touch on warning labels and such is that the fueling port always gets a big red one with bold white caps saying 'fueling' or something of the nature. Also, the fueling port should be close to your tank to prevent the fuel line from traveling near and through vital components and components which could ignite the fuel in passing. And with the vents, compartments and warning labels (which right now your labels look more like placeholders, which I'm assuming you're using them as such) start out with a lot, like you have, then reduce as you clip the unnecessary from your ship. I think it's easier *wouldn't know, I'm a writer, not an artist* to remove then trying to insert something needed into a clustered area.
well, those are some more points I thought of, and I can't wait to see it when you finish up the rest of the bird the same way as you've done the nose area. Schematics anytime soon? :-D
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Sorry, but I could'nt find a way to translate a word.
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Cool look. Kinda like space ship one and a V-22 mated somehow.
One thing that I do to get something to look right is to imagine a piece of machinery's purpose. If it needs to take off vertically, it also needs engines that change positions as shown for example. My suggestion would be to look at every piece of the spaceship and imagine a use for it. If a vent or a warning lable doesnt perform any task you can think of, remove it.
Also, i dont think you should put any dirt or scarring on it, except maybe as the result of reentry, but it is too damn shiny. Why does it need to be shiny? If this is a military aircraft, reflective (easily seen at long distances) surfaces make no sense.
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Thank you a lot for your comment and suggestions. The whole design and parts I have done regarding purposes wich make more or less sense. I put the same warning label anywhere to get an idea how it would look like. You are right. I have to put them in places where they make sense.
Even though it is not a military aircraft (the drawing is somehow misleading) I agree that it is too shiny. It should look more like the varnish of civil aircrafts.
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Thank you for taking a look. This vtol (the design of the engines depend on this) belongs to main character in my film project. He rides it before he gets blown into universe.
The plot is in near future. Everybody wants me to put more dirt and damage on it. But it would not fit into the story. Similar to our world everyone cares about their cars are clean. I don't want it to look like these made out of one piece stealth things.
So if you have some suggestions, it would be great.
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Wow! 
Die ausgezeichnete(verschiedene) Form der Motoren und des Schwanzteiles. Mir gefรคllt sehr.
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