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pseudometry β€” 7.34mm by-nc-nd
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Description A simple measurement
can make a man
lose himself; a blurring, no more
than a grainy smudge

a scant 7.34mm long
this rice-grain, seven weeks old
with one hundred and twenty nine
heartbeats per minute

β€”all this, from a mere sesame-seed of a heart
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Comments: 116

pseudometry In reply to ??? [2012-09-25 20:05:44 +0000 UTC]

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MagicClare [2012-08-30 18:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! I read this aloud and found it most pleasing in aesthetic flow. Conceptually, of course, it is original and succinct in word selection. (no pun intended)

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pseudometry In reply to MagicClare [2012-08-30 20:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you, that's definitely a high compliment

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0hgravity [2012-08-19 21:01:05 +0000 UTC]

this is a lovely little piece
every line counts and it all fits so well together.

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pseudometry In reply to 0hgravity [2012-08-20 20:14:20 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you

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0hgravity In reply to pseudometry [2012-08-20 21:31:35 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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leaftherabbit [2012-07-24 23:54:59 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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pseudometry In reply to leaftherabbit [2012-07-25 03:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you

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leaftherabbit In reply to pseudometry [2012-07-25 03:40:36 +0000 UTC]

of course!

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LadyofGaerdon [2012-06-06 00:18:13 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing. Congratulations!

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pseudometry In reply to LadyofGaerdon [2012-06-06 00:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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LadyofGaerdon In reply to pseudometry [2012-06-06 01:16:22 +0000 UTC]

Sure.

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Lottie-Girl [2012-05-19 00:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Concise and beautiful.

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pseudometry In reply to Lottie-Girl [2012-05-19 03:47:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.

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Lottie-Girl In reply to pseudometry [2012-05-20 18:19:16 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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pseudometry In reply to Lottie-Girl [2012-05-20 20:55:31 +0000 UTC]

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DailyLitDeviations [2012-05-18 11:42:54 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: [link] Congratulations on your DD!

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article.

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pseudometry In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2012-05-18 19:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!

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HaveTales-WillTell [2012-03-03 23:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Well said.

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pseudometry In reply to HaveTales-WillTell [2012-03-05 01:24:03 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you

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Iekeby [2012-01-27 23:27:15 +0000 UTC]

This has touched and melted my heart. This is the embodiment of powerful poetry and the beauty of man. c:
It's so moving, perfectly done!

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pseudometry In reply to Iekeby [2012-01-29 02:35:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm very pleased to hear that. Thank you muchly!

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Pyrefly-child [2012-01-27 05:54:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this really touched me, such beautiful clarity.

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pseudometry In reply to Pyrefly-child [2012-01-27 19:49:43 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you. Glad you thought so

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Pyrefly-child In reply to pseudometry [2012-01-28 02:36:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh, you are a fellow NZer! Even better.

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pseudometry In reply to Pyrefly-child [2012-01-29 02:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Haha. Yep. Go NZ!

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RandomActofMuse2 [2012-01-27 04:14:35 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD, and on the baby!

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pseudometry In reply to RandomActofMuse2 [2012-01-27 04:18:24 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you and thank you!

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RandomActofMuse2 In reply to pseudometry [2012-01-27 04:26:47 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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pseudometry In reply to RandomActofMuse2 [2012-01-27 04:35:46 +0000 UTC]

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bangingonkeyboards [2012-01-27 01:39:06 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeous.

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pseudometry In reply to bangingonkeyboards [2012-01-27 04:17:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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beeswingblue [2012-01-27 01:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD! This piece so very much deserves it (as do you!).

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pseudometry In reply to beeswingblue [2012-01-27 04:18:10 +0000 UTC]

Ah thank you, you're much too kind

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beeswingblue In reply to pseudometry [2012-01-27 05:08:25 +0000 UTC]

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pseudometry In reply to beeswingblue [2012-01-27 19:47:30 +0000 UTC]

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flowerpower09 [2012-01-27 00:55:49 +0000 UTC]

I think I love everything about this.

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pseudometry In reply to flowerpower09 [2012-01-27 01:15:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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OddFacade [2012-01-26 22:25:45 +0000 UTC]

Epic, much?

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pseudometry In reply to OddFacade [2012-01-26 23:04:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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PetPetAngel [2012-01-26 21:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Very powerful! I'm impressed at your ability to communicate so much emotion in so few words!

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pseudometry In reply to PetPetAngel [2012-01-26 21:41:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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rachaelwrites [2012-01-26 19:45:54 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeous!
Every word adds meaning, and none are wasted. . .I approve, good sir. I approve.

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pseudometry In reply to rachaelwrites [2012-01-26 20:29:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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LiliWrites [2012-01-26 18:49:04 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on your DD, Jamie! <3

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pseudometry In reply to LiliWrites [2012-01-26 20:29:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Lili

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PursuingTheCerberus [2012-01-26 18:17:45 +0000 UTC]

absolutely amazing!

Such power! Such brevity! Not an easy combination to achieve success with, but you've done it! Congrats on the DD!!!!!

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pseudometry In reply to PursuingTheCerberus [2012-01-26 20:29:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! That's high praise indeed

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SilverInkblot [2012-01-26 18:08:11 +0000 UTC]

I swear I already had this piece in my favorites It's always a pleasure to see something you recognize in the DDs for the day. Congrats!

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pseudometry In reply to SilverInkblot [2012-01-26 20:30:02 +0000 UTC]

I know it is isn't it? Thanks so much!

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