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I bought myself a Moleskineto emulate Picasso, Hemingway
was never seen without his
in canal-side cafes, Spanish bull rings.
My fingers grease its ebon spine
over and over in tactile search
for some hidden leak of creative essence
I found Dante's house
down an old narrow street
alongside a crowd of German tourists
I did not enter only stared
at his stones, the exterior.
The hotel room is filled
with the buzz of the alleyway below,
restaurant kitchens' backdoors opening
for cooks, waitstaff, rubbish bags and oaths,
effusive shoppers admiring new pashmina
scarves haggled from vendors
in the adjacent market square.
I close the window.
The shaft of my pen is bent
and buckled, cratered with teethmarks,
the plastic pocket-clip
long snapped off.
It smells of stale ink
and lemon balm handcream,
the brass ballpoint idling
dry in its socket.
I bought myself a lambskin leather-jacket,
russet brown to match my boots
before they seeped their colour
across Florence's rain-soaked cobbles.
My feet mottled and blotted with a plague
of cheap shoe dye,
I scrub and scrub with Sard soap
in the hotel's faux-marble shower.
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Comments: 88
forestmeetwildfire In reply to pseudometry [2013-02-20 23:06:40 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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anonymuis [2011-11-13 15:02:47 +0000 UTC]
You know, I have this in my favourites for a few months now... And I still occasionally think about this. Things remind me of this poem. How we, how I, struggle to find inspiration.
Thank you so much for this
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pseudometry In reply to anonymuis [2011-11-13 22:54:22 +0000 UTC]
Wow; thanks very much! That is high praise indeed
(You know, ironically, I actually wrote the first draft of this in Shakespeare's house of all places, in about five minutes, after a long spell of writer's block)
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RollingTomorrow [2011-10-15 23:24:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for submitting to the Critique Folder at #Writers--club !
Your idea here and presentation are quite interesting. There are a lot of ways to try to find inspiration; turning to some of literature's most famous individuals is only one way of many, but you portrayed it very well in this piece. Your descriptions were well written and very thoughtful.
Great work and congratulations on the Daily Deviation!
*TheFinalHikari
Founder of #Writers--club , #LandoftheSky , and #Live-Love-Write
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RollingTomorrow In reply to pseudometry [2011-10-17 14:32:38 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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handswouldweave [2011-10-05 18:36:15 +0000 UTC]
This is just incredible. What's even better (or perhaps worse) is that I can relate so much to so many of these things. I can't use Moleskins anymore.
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pseudometry In reply to handswouldweave [2011-10-05 19:11:16 +0000 UTC]
Haha. I hoped it would be relate-able, somewhat. Thanks very much
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MattVoscinar [2011-10-02 04:29:32 +0000 UTC]
Damn. This is probably the best poem I've ever read about finding insperation and the inability to write. Kudos.
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pseudometry In reply to MattVoscinar [2011-10-02 19:26:54 +0000 UTC]
Well thanks very much! That is high praise indeed
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LaAcquaAlta [2011-09-09 22:51:52 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful concept and great descriptive writing (also the title is thoughtful and really augments the piece)
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pseudometry In reply to LaAcquaAlta [2011-09-11 22:11:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for that, glad you like the title!
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pseudometry In reply to indiana-w [2011-09-11 22:11:45 +0000 UTC]
I'm pleased you found it so
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indiana-w In reply to pseudometry [2011-09-12 02:12:48 +0000 UTC]
Well, you're quite welcome.
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Lit-Twitter [2011-09-09 15:37:22 +0000 UTC]
Chirp, congrats on the DD, it's been twittered. [link]
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pseudometry In reply to Lit-Twitter [2011-09-11 22:11:30 +0000 UTC]
Cheers very much, lit-twitter bird
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angelStained [2011-09-09 15:01:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh yes yes. This is such geniusβ 'grats and keep writing, please.
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pseudometry In reply to angelStained [2011-09-11 22:12:27 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you-- 'genius' I feel is a tad undeserved, but I'm grateful nonetheless I will indeed.
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beeswingblue [2011-09-09 14:57:51 +0000 UTC]
*FINALLY* a DD for this piece!! It's very much deserved! This poem is one of my all-time dA faves.
Congrats!
P.S. It's great to see the DD system work as it "should."
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pseudometry In reply to beeswingblue [2011-09-11 22:15:37 +0000 UTC]
Well thank you very much! I'm very pleased to hear you like it so much, as it's one of the few pieces I've written I actually like myself, you know? So it means a lot to get this sort of response Many thanks again!
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EyesOfTheForest [2011-09-09 14:35:49 +0000 UTC]
This is what I call poetic talent! Not my silly teen dribbles.
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pseudometry In reply to EyesOfTheForest [2011-09-11 22:14:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much
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IrreducibleHashmap [2011-09-09 14:17:11 +0000 UTC]
Finding Dante's house, but not entering, is sublime irony and a potent metaphor for the inability to follow one's creative impulse. Thank you for bringing this poem into the world.
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pseudometry In reply to IrreducibleHashmap [2011-09-11 22:13:54 +0000 UTC]
Haha thanks very much, yes, it was an interesting moment, just standing outside and staring.
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QuiEstInLiteris [2011-09-09 12:57:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I don't know about calling it a superstition. I know for a fact that my writing is better after I've screwed the top off a fountain pen.
Congratulations on your DD. This is fantastic.
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pseudometry In reply to QuiEstInLiteris [2011-09-11 22:13:17 +0000 UTC]
Haha. Well, glad to hear it works for you. And thanks very much.
Maybe I've just not encountered the right sort of fountain pen...
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QuiEstInLiteris In reply to pseudometry [2011-09-12 00:50:57 +0000 UTC]
Buying purple ink helps.
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pseudometry In reply to QuiEstInLiteris [2011-09-12 02:09:57 +0000 UTC]
Aha! I'll be sure to give it a try...
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SandEffect [2011-09-09 11:50:17 +0000 UTC]
I liked this poem even though I am a very casual reader. I heard someone mention the last stanza, and you mentioning that it's a "second skin". Yes, once you explained, I saw the link, so there's a missing connector of concepts. I very much like the last stanza and I think that's the one that sets the tone for the whole poem while the rest starts narrowing down into the specifics of the visual descriptions and the feelings. I like this a whole lot.
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pseudometry In reply to SandEffect [2011-09-11 22:18:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for that, and for your considered comment as a whole. I appreciate it
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MeFlyingFree [2011-09-09 11:41:18 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! Inspirational! I'm not a writer, but an avid reader, and I know what i like reading. This is one of them. Well done!
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pseudometry In reply to MeFlyingFree [2011-09-11 22:17:29 +0000 UTC]
I'm very pleased to hear you found it so. Nothing so pleasing to a writer as when someone who loves reading enjoys your work
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MeFlyingFree In reply to pseudometry [2011-09-12 02:15:01 +0000 UTC]
I will definitely be reading more!
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MeFlyingFree In reply to pseudometry [2011-09-12 11:28:04 +0000 UTC]
You're a talented writer!
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