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...both Fenris and Silvia did not move for some time. They were still trying to recollect their thoughts after she put herself on top.Eventually, Silvia kissed her lover to release him from his trance. Although he refocused himself, Fenris still had his gaze upon her and her body.
One of her hands slid along his body. First of all, his large chest then his toned belly.
A sudden feeling made Fenris go red with embarrassment. Her hand had almost reached it but his pants and belt were the only things stopping her from going any further.
Silvia laughed and pressed her body against his. She kissed her dearest Fernis, distracting him from her hands as they were undoing the only attachment holding his pants.
Fenris' mind drifted away again, for the pleasure of her kiss was all too much to resist. Her lips had every tasteful flavour he could remember savouring in his travels.
Silvia drew his attention to her hand, which were holding his pants and belt - connected as though it was in a one-piece set.
Again, his face glowed bright red as he realised his position once more. She giggled and whispered into his ear.
"Do not tease me any longer. Show me that you love me so."
Fenris knew. Their love was much more than just a tender kiss on the lips or holding each other in a passionate embrace.
He ran his hands along every part of Silvia's body in complete synchronisation. Her hair. Her face. Her breasts. The sides along her body. Her slender legs.
He silently embraced the thought of her as the one masterpiece he has chosen above all others. Before experiencing the full intensity of her purity.
Fenris assumes his dominance and places himself on top of his beloved. He removes the last of her undergarments and slowly placed everything aside.
He nips Silvia's ear and whispers ever so softly.
"To be together mind, body and soul. I shall take you away so that we be nearer to the heavens for this night."
~To be continued~
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Comments: 4
secretladyspider [2008-03-29 05:13:31 +0000 UTC]
Well, it's a good base of a story. There are a few areas you need to work on though... writing stories isn't like writing poetry. This reads like a poem in story form. Instead, it should flow like a story. It also needs a bit of detail and explanation... other than that, it is interesting so far. Just elaborate and get out of poetry mode when writing stories.
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only-for-you-kura [2008-03-26 10:57:54 +0000 UTC]
Aww,Pimp!Man<3
That was divine to read.
Thank you so much for writing this!!
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Pixie--Kitty [2008-03-25 08:49:03 +0000 UTC]
You are some great writer. Very descriptive in a really magical way. You really do grasp the full emotion of an act and write it so perfectly. ^_^
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