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Have a drop of the ol' creature.You will not trick me again, Edward.
Why not free your mind from all this... madness?
Says the one that has the tendency to murder in cold blood.
Henry, it was you who wanted the evil to leave you.
I'd never thought you would be it, Edward.
But don't you feel alive every time you drink?
If you say that then why can't I control you, Edward?
It's because your evil intentions are that great, Henry.
Then no more, your treacherous ways will stay here, with the bottle.
HENRY! DRINK IT!
NO! YOU WILL NOT PLAY ALONG WITH MY STRINGS!
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Sodman2k [2008-07-27 09:23:44 +0000 UTC]
Dr Henry Jekyll and Mr Edward Hyde.
Old friends of mine.
Two points of critisism:
The repeated use of their name while adressing each other seems... wrong.
Also the line: "Says the one that has the tendency to murder in cold blood" does not echo the Doctor's nature... well not my understanding of him.
But i guess that is your aim, to reinterpret them... so yeah..
Sodman2k
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Psychol0gist In reply to Sodman2k [2008-07-27 13:29:46 +0000 UTC]
I was merely portraying the control between each of the characters.
There wasn't much to go on considering I wrote of the key elements of the characters and that was it.
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