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Published: 2010-02-21 22:55:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description Today
my skin is draped
across my frame
in just the right away,
resisting the urge to erode
around the edges-
I wear my coating with
the secret promise
of someone else's
acceptance.

The winds of Spring
are out of place,
impatiently awaiting their turn
and from the plains
of my interior
the glow of July
appears to rest.

I can allow
every nerve in this once
resonant shell
to bond with the tissue
of the sky,
every layer of cerulean
becomes a deeper
part of
who I am.
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Comments: 16

BloodStainAffiliate [2010-03-19 22:44:54 +0000 UTC]

"I wear my coating with
the secret promise
of someone else's
acceptance."

I think this is possibly the most sincere sentiment I've read in a long time. Wonderful poem!

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PulseofExistence In reply to BloodStainAffiliate [2010-03-21 16:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Awh, thank you so much. I'm truly glad you think so, the truth makes for wonderful emotion in my opinion.

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AlexRider-00Nothing [2010-03-19 22:22:36 +0000 UTC]

know what you mean, beautiful

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PulseofExistence In reply to AlexRider-00Nothing [2010-03-21 16:25:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, very much.

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Leurindal [2010-02-24 18:55:50 +0000 UTC]

the beauty of your poetry never ceases to amaze!

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PulseofExistence In reply to Leurindal [2010-03-07 17:08:16 +0000 UTC]

Awh, well thank you. I try.

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Leurindal In reply to PulseofExistence [2010-03-07 17:41:26 +0000 UTC]

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DragonsChest [2010-02-24 17:42:44 +0000 UTC]

Poetry par Excellence...

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PulseofExistence In reply to DragonsChest [2010-03-07 17:08:27 +0000 UTC]

A million thanks, sweet friend.

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DragonsChest In reply to PulseofExistence [2010-03-08 04:55:57 +0000 UTC]


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SweetBlackRose13 [2010-02-24 02:05:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm so happy to come back after so long and read something so positive from you.

This made me crave summer. You're still impossibly amazing.

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PulseofExistence In reply to SweetBlackRose13 [2010-03-07 17:09:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm just glad you're back! I loves me some poetry a la sweet lady. And thank you, I too am wishing for some summer.

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SweetBlackRose13 In reply to PulseofExistence [2010-03-08 22:30:00 +0000 UTC]

^___^ I'm glad you're glad I'm back!! You're very welcome. <3

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Feed-The-Dark [2010-02-22 12:42:56 +0000 UTC]

You really captured the gentle nostalgia and longing that spring brings, like a gentle hand waking one from the winter slumber. I love the idea of bonding with the sky, very beautiful imagery.

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PulseofExistence In reply to Feed-The-Dark [2010-03-07 17:10:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. Can you tell I'm eager for Spring? The weather lately has been such a tease.

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Feed-The-Dark In reply to PulseofExistence [2010-03-08 12:36:46 +0000 UTC]

Agreed.

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