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PulseofExistence — Limestone Secrets
Published: 2010-03-11 23:47:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 213; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 3
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Description There is a secret at
the tips of the trees,
in the newly blooming buds
opening like a child's
unmolested eyes and
rubbing away the
crust of
another Winter.

In the pale blue patches
peeking from behind
cloudy curtains,
rays dripping
the promises of
tomorrow's warmth
into our eager mouths.

We drink as if a
thousand years of drought
have been unleashed upon our
throats
and every drop
is a reminder of what it's like
to crave release.

I'm overturning every rock,
spreading the moss
in even layers across
my bones,
braiding the ivy
into separate strands
of my hair-
anything to understand
the patterns etched
in limestone,
inscriptions I ache
to uncover.

The wind's voice
is a warm hand upon
my face,
a reassuring thumb
tracing my cheekbones;
consoling the
uncertainty of a child
refusing to accept
defeat.

Hell, it feels good
to breathe again...
cleaner air from
this point
on.
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Comments: 14

RawPoetry [2010-03-17 01:05:46 +0000 UTC]

Lovely images and concepts here!

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PulseofExistence In reply to RawPoetry [2010-03-19 01:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Feed-The-Dark [2010-03-14 16:27:36 +0000 UTC]

There's something about the flow of the very last little stanza that is amazing. Something about the rhythm or simply the placement, but it just sounds amazing out loud. A beautiful ode to Spring.

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PulseofExistence In reply to Feed-The-Dark [2010-03-19 01:54:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, I feel this gorgeous weather deserves some words to be said about it.

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Leurindal [2010-03-14 09:30:35 +0000 UTC]

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PulseofExistence In reply to Leurindal [2010-03-19 01:54:20 +0000 UTC]

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DragonsChest [2010-03-13 04:55:09 +0000 UTC]

Good poem Jay, makes me yearn for Springtime all the more...

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PulseofExistence In reply to DragonsChest [2010-03-19 01:54:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, love. Couldn't agree more.

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SweetBlackRose13 [2010-03-13 02:36:08 +0000 UTC]

Okay so, whenever I start one of your poems there's this sense of excitement that takes over me, like "Ahhhh.. this is gonna be so great. " And you never fail. Rather, in this one you delivered even stronger than you usually do, I can feel how ecstatic you are about Spring, and I totally share that.

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PulseofExistence In reply to SweetBlackRose13 [2010-03-19 01:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha, that's so awesome. Thank you very much, my dear.

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SweetBlackRose13 In reply to PulseofExistence [2010-03-20 03:23:42 +0000 UTC]

You're super welcome.

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littlemissredeyes [2010-03-11 23:53:17 +0000 UTC]

Amazing words love, like always. I agreed with loving this weather, and you captured such a beauitful picture with your words discribing spring<3

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PulseofExistence In reply to littlemissredeyes [2010-03-12 04:08:52 +0000 UTC]

Awh, thanks Miss. Glad you enjoy it.

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littlemissredeyes In reply to PulseofExistence [2010-03-12 15:20:25 +0000 UTC]

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