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PulseofExistence — The Difference
Published: 2010-07-08 20:51:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 438; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 2
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Description We were supposed to
conquer the world,
just you and I
with our big ideas
filled to bursting with hot air
and a trace of
invincibility lodged deep
in the creases of
our oh-so cocky smiles.

We were supposed to
paint something beautiful with
our words and memories,
extracts from the best of times
when eternal meant the night
wouldn't end, we could
watch fire erupt from
the horizon and stay strong
long after the bottle
was empty.

We were supposed to
live forever with the stars
curled tightly in our hair,
not surviving, not existing
in an animated body,
not staring out the windows
of a glossy gaze—
we were supposed to
do a lot of things,
but talk is cheap, right?
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Comments: 18

the-poetic-bum [2010-07-19 08:28:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm a sucker for first person poems, and this is no exception.

Sucker punched on the last line, I like it. I have no problems here. I am content.

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PulseofExistence In reply to the-poetic-bum [2010-07-28 16:49:29 +0000 UTC]

A poem with no corrections? Seems suspicious. Thank you all the same, for liking it.

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RosalinaNantais [2010-07-18 04:12:17 +0000 UTC]

I love it Jay. Really hit home for me.

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PulseofExistence In reply to RosalinaNantais [2010-07-28 16:49:41 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad it did, love.

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SweetBlackRose13 [2010-07-18 01:46:26 +0000 UTC]

I can relate to this a lot right now. Your poetry is always so natural and smooth, and it's always so great to get back to it.

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PulseofExistence In reply to SweetBlackRose13 [2010-07-28 16:50:04 +0000 UTC]

Awh, thank you very much. I'm enthralled to be able to reach out through my words.

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DragonsChest [2010-07-17 06:13:27 +0000 UTC]

Your poetry is enriched with elements that leave one with a deeper sense of emotions.

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PulseofExistence In reply to DragonsChest [2010-07-28 16:50:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, as always, my dear friend.

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ZexyPineCones [2010-07-10 23:18:43 +0000 UTC]

The subtle humor hidden between the lines of candor...quite wonderful.

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PulseofExistence In reply to ZexyPineCones [2010-07-28 16:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, glad you thought so.

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ZexyPineCones In reply to PulseofExistence [2010-07-30 00:32:24 +0000 UTC]

As am I.

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archelyxs [2010-07-09 01:09:34 +0000 UTC]

I love the energy and idealism in this piece,
and the sense of togetherness through it all.

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PulseofExistence In reply to archelyxs [2010-07-28 16:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, so happy you enjoyed it.

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archelyxs In reply to PulseofExistence [2010-07-28 17:04:20 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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manufactured-grace [2010-07-08 21:30:21 +0000 UTC]

very honest, very true
like it

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PulseofExistence In reply to manufactured-grace [2010-07-28 16:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Well, I thank you, truly and honestly.

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surferbabe16 [2010-07-08 20:53:36 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful, sad but truly beautiful. I cannot express how much I love this x

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PulseofExistence In reply to surferbabe16 [2010-07-08 21:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I'm really glad you enjoyed the read.

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